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When would the time come When you'd be finally on time When I won't need to wait When you would already be there when I came.. I hope you value time as much as I do Coz we don't know when we'll die, that's true Please keep and do your promise Or I might as well forget you even did Can you really keep and do it? Or are those just words to assure me? Are you really ready to commit with it? Coz if you can't please tell me I don't know if I should still hope for you I want to believe you, please I really do But you've made me wait and sometimes even stood me up Now I don't really know if there's nothing up..
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Jul 6, 2020
Jul 6, 2020 at 12:23 AM UTC
Time and Commitment
When would the time come When you'd be finally on time When I won't need to wait When you would already be there when I came.. I hope you value time as much as I do Coz we don't know when we'll die, that's true Please keep and do your promise Or I might as well forget you even did Can you really keep and do it? Or are those just words to assure me? Are you really ready to commit with it? Coz if you can't please tell me I don't know if I should still hope for you I want to believe you, please I really do But you've made me wait and sometimes even stood me up Now I don't really know if there's nothing up..
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Jul 6, 2020
Jul 6, 2020 at 12:23 AM UTC
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