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Exiting a vehicle of fading black Looking about But not looking back Eagerly setting out With a pack in back Only but a few miles to the real start This day, starting at the very bottom River of black rock and a strip of yellow paint Below eager feet Trekking up, not stopping for the heat To the left, tall hill of dry brush and crumbling rock To the right, a great rocky edge Overlooking a grand sight Of distant hills and the city People ahead, talking of the journey Laughing and prancing about Soon I'm passing them, Getting ahead Eventually stopping to see the view Only to hear a distant shout; A name, called in the wind Time to turn around? Leave before it has truly begun? Sad, indeed it is, For it was with great disappointment And great sadness That lay deep in my chest As we dragged down the hill Maybe another day to complete the rest But oh, this day is not that day. - Jay M June 28th, 2020
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Jun 28, 2020
Jun 28, 2020 at 10:46 PM UTC
The "Great" Hike
Exiting a vehicle of fading black Looking about But not looking back Eagerly setting out With a pack in back Only but a few miles to the real start This day, starting at the very bottom River of black rock and a strip of yellow paint Below eager feet Trekking up, not stopping for the heat To the left, tall hill of dry brush and crumbling rock To the right, a great rocky edge Overlooking a grand sight Of distant hills and the city People ahead, talking of the journey Laughing and prancing about Soon I'm passing them, Getting ahead Eventually stopping to see the view Only to hear a distant shout; A name, called in the wind Time to turn around? Leave before it has truly begun? Sad, indeed it is, For it was with great disappointment And great sadness That lay deep in my chest As we dragged down the hill Maybe another day to complete the rest But oh, this day is not that day. - Jay M June 28th, 2020
For Father's Day my family went hiking. It was supposed to be a total of 9 miles, but my family got tired once they almost reached the 0.6 marker. I went ahead, happily, but had to turn around and go back down with them. It was sad- I had hoped so much to go on a long hike. Maybe another day.
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Jun 28, 2020
Jun 28, 2020 at 10:46 PM UTC
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