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uptown train a rare sighting, a shiny dime,, in a city where clothesworn-grime, an unshed waning gray, a skin coloring, stony faces always chewing, enduring in tunnels neath rivers of streets, there is no moon, so little hope, nightly somebody’s thinking, somebody’s baby, I’ll be, tonight, someday, maybe who will see them as they are, willI I, will I, before they’ve gone too far, roadies, touring to nowhere, disciples, nose-led by a vision, daring, but archetypal there are no gardens, but plenty secrets, all planted, that will never planet bloom, seeds raised to die, in watered sorrows drown, embryos stillborn, passed to daughters down the trains go uptown to shiny places, to uptown people, washed, shiny faces, bedecked with futures, hope, their jewel, but not for them, the downtime people five pm, afternoon dying into night bleeding, the subway noises, the perfumed stink, all, goes unnoticed by senses dulled, unfulfilled, day goes down, another, and another, colored pained refrain, why do we bother?
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Jun 9, 2020
Jun 9, 2020 at 5:13 PM UTC
After Tom Waits: uptown train
uptown train a rare sighting, a shiny dime,, in a city where clothesworn-grime, an unshed waning gray, a skin coloring, stony faces always chewing, enduring in tunnels neath rivers of streets, there is no moon, so little hope, nightly somebody’s thinking, somebody’s baby, I’ll be, tonight, someday, maybe who will see them as they are, willI I, will I, before they’ve gone too far, roadies, touring to nowhere, disciples, nose-led by a vision, daring, but archetypal there are no gardens, but plenty secrets, all planted, that will never planet bloom, seeds raised to die, in watered sorrows drown, embryos stillborn, passed to daughters down the trains go uptown to shiny places, to uptown people, washed, shiny faces, bedecked with futures, hope, their jewel, but not for them, the downtime people five pm, afternoon dying into night bleeding, the subway noises, the perfumed stink, all, goes unnoticed by senses dulled, unfulfilled, day goes down, another, and another, colored pained refrain, why do we bother?
inspired by: Outside another yellow moon Has punched a hole in the nighttime, yes I climb through the window and down the street I'm shining like a new dime The downtown trains are full With all those Brooklyn girls They try so hard to break out of their little worlds Well, you wave your hand and they scatter like crows They have nothing that will ever capture your heart They're just thorns without the rose Be careful of them in the dark Oh if I was the one You chose to be your only one Oh baby can't you hear me now, can't you hear me now? Will I see you tonight On a downtown train? Every night it's just the same You leave me lonely, now I know your window and I know it's late I know your stairs and your doorway I walk down your street and past your gate I stand by the light at the four-way You watch them as the fall Oh baby, they all have heart attacks They stay at the carnival But they'll never win you back Will I see you tonight On a downtown train? Every night it's just the same Oh, baby Will I see you tonight On a downtown train? All of my dreams just fall like rain Oh, baby, on a downtown train Will I see you tonight On a downtown train? Every night, every night it's just the same Oh, baby Will I see you tonight On a downtown train? All of my dreams just fall like rain Well, on a downtown train Well, on a downtown train Well, on a downtown train Well, on a downtown train On a downtown train Source: LyricFind Songwriters: Tom Waits
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Jun 9, 2020
Jun 9, 2020 at 5:13 PM UTC
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