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tom-waiting
36/M/from round, outback right here waiting for you
wish i knew you way back then but again then you wouldn’t have glanced at me once, let alone twice but them ole aphorisms have their uses, useful when dreaming in colorful surrealisms better later, than not at all, my sad eyed lady of the highlands, better for having met you, than not at all...
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Aug 22, 2020
Aug 22, 2020 at 7:33 AM UTC
sad eyed lady of the highlands
To Destroy, First Build  (The Construction of Human Dissolution) steely Ironies begin as the end nears, leather torn by fabric, when humans begin the separation protocol, **when first we intend to dissolve, we need construct, ***** barriers so true, good fences make good neighbors...no. great enemies. the invisible ones, freight train tracks running down the middle of the bed, new lands of “his side, her side,” shut your light off! he makes a joke, she don’t turn her head, maybe she, offers instead a secret grimace, thinking inside too little late, bothering/thinking go write your breakup poetry, that’ll keep you truly invested and ocupado, lock door’d, why is my toothbrush in a moving van, that I didn’t hire, no destination home, notes passed via refrigerator door, what was  that “have children chatter?” months+words recent, huh? just months ago, not confused, don’t touch his diet drink! man-o-man, thank god we didn’t do a vaca drive up the West Coast, hanging with relatives in SF, LA not your town, you hate tinsel and pretense. BS. arguing when we need to add gas, a wonderful double entendre, when was the end of detente, we abrogate the Treaty of Versailles, another place we won’t ever get to go-gether,** that just makes me sadly happier, and I think; now I understand why he always booked us seats on airplanes separated  by the aisle, no head upon his shoulder, in my lap, holding hands needs disinfectant, social distancing solves many problems now, need now, no asking how, to conceive destroy, imagine concrete: first you must build, it’s how one does it, human dissolution requires work, malice aforethought, we both master builders, see yeah,  that’s a joke, a good one too...let’s laugh not together at us, our edifice crumbles
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Aug 6, 2020
Aug 6, 2020 at 2:22 PM UTC
To Destroy, First Build (The Construction of Human Dissolution)
To Destroy, First Build  (The Construction of Human Dissolution) steely Ironies begin as the end nears, leather torn by fabric, when humans begin the separation protocol, **when first we intend to dissolve, we need construct, ***** barriers so true, good fences make good neighbors...no. great enemies. the invisible ones, freight train tracks running down the middle of the bed, new lands of “his side, her side,” shut your light off! he makes a joke, she don’t turn her head, maybe she, offers instead a secret grimace, thinking inside too little late, bothering/thinking go write your breakup poetry, that’ll keep you truly invested and ocupado, lock door’d, why is my toothbrush in a moving van, that I didn’t hire, no destination home, notes passed via refrigerator door, what was  that “have children chatter?” months+words recent, huh? just months ago, not confused, don’t touch his diet drink! man-o-man, thank god we didn’t do a vaca drive up the West Coast, hanging with relatives in SF, LA not your town, you hate tinsel and pretense. BS. arguing when we need to add gas, a wonderful double entendre, when was the end of detente, we abrogate the Treaty of Versailles, another place we won’t ever get to go-gether,** that just makes me sadly happier, and I think; now I understand why he always booked us seats on airplanes separated  by the aisle, no head upon his shoulder, in my lap, holding hands needs disinfectant, social distancing solves many problems now, need now, no asking how, to conceive destroy, imagine concrete: first you must build, it’s how one does it, human dissolution requires work, malice aforethought, we both master builders, see yeah,  that’s a joke, a good one too...let’s laugh not together at us, our edifice crumbles
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the bookies of High Street North will give you odds, 1000 to 1, our paths will never cross, a simple notion, we’ll never meet, it’s a sucker’s bet they’re happy to take, despite, shhhhh, not that hard, truth be told, airplane, Terminal5,  Heathrow Express, Paddington Bear Station and yet, there are oceans to fly over, viruses in every nook and cranny, and the biggest risk, those what ifs...and the worries viral multiply as imagining grows more spectacular than wild flowers on the heath, bogs conjuring up Holmesian fluorescent hounds she’ll know for whom this poem tolls, but will never understand that my envision of her world, through her eyes, unfamiliar words mellifluous, for me, they, a nectar, the special Ritz teatime, but don’t be mistaking me for an Anglophile no, this Yank plainly loves her garden of nature, and her own nature, beloved as well, floral blooming, how it grasps his heart with her two hand’s nouns, seizing and ceasing its beating, nicks it, his rhythm for poetic composition, so little more to add, other than writing this made both a young boy glad, an old man sad... postscript someday she’ll crook her finger, like the crook of her hair, and this Tom, will no longer be waiting
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Jul 25, 2020
Jul 25, 2020 at 7:29 AM UTC
she’ll know (for the lady of the heath)
After John Prine: **“There's flies in the kitchen, I can hear 'em there buzzing, And I ain't done nothing since I woke up today”** Mr. John Prine                        <£> There's flies in the kitchen, all around my eyes and head, they’re just gossiping bout me, why most mornings I’m still laying in bed at almost near noon-time, why too, them angels and their a-fluttering wings, a-flapping, still hanging around, when they’re so far from home truth be told, I kinda like new combinations, the musical vibes, magic incantations, boogie woogie, fuzzy buzzy eyelash sounds, bluesy background harmonies against the harps them angel wings are playing, I’m getting every note writ down so, I can play it well on the morrow, on my following them higher up, all the ways up on that glowing shining stairway to heaven, guarantee-damn-teeing entrance through the pearly gates for the flies and a lazy, no-account worthless S.O.B. like me
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Jul 17, 2020
Jul 17, 2020 at 3:02 PM UTC
After John Prine: “There's flies in the kitchen...
<> reversed a verse from “Like a Rolling Stone; ~complements to Mr. B. Dylan, a Nobel man~ you, me, hear what you’re hearing, feeling it, you, me, hear what you’re thinking, feeling that, regenerating, excising, pinching a single word of Bobby’s lyricizing, knowing, you’ve just handbag-snatched a poem full. the rolling stone sings of next meal scrounging, he’s talking to you, knowing you, you customizing his lyrics modifying-jiggering, for your purposeful brain, emotional crazed notions, your monsanto seed of needs and strains. *nah, I’m fibbing, polite-ly lying, like clover waves springing up overnight after a night’s soaking, raining, picking up hints, misdirections, clues, *** poem titles dripping from my glassy eyes! des idées for the next poem, the one, in the garden hereafter, now called thereafter, all arriving in tranches, backyard bunches, just to write down the titles fast enough, sometimes, trouble, oft easy, sometimes rough, but always a fast rush jiggling job.* yeah, I’m liking that word, scrounging, got character, internal noises aclashing, so I’m scrounging while lounging , it’s so ******* easy, it’s getting borrowed till you! steal it out from under me, like an ill reputed good poet should... P.S. don’t keep me waiting! let the scrounging commencin’ tw36
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 4:38 PM UTC
scrounging your next poem (now you don’t seem so proud)
what’s the difference tween ************ & writing poetry? let us cut to the chase, cause I know how much-you hate to be kept waiting, lest your addled, added, impatient attention grow as big as the U.S. budget deficit. answer: not much in fact, can’t come up with a single signal differentiation. 1. both require tissues when done 2. both give you short and sweet satisfaction, that is a renewable resource 3. serotonin levels up, up and away - yay! 4. long term impact for both is wrist pain 5. inevitably, makes you late for tedious life chores 6. doesn’t burn much calories, though you record it on your activity-tracker as “aerobic exercise” 7. one tends to exclaim “Oh **** when completed. 8. both master bait you (pun. get it?) who’s the master, who’s the bait? 9. are you bored already? Go forth and do either activity, (I know you’re getting hot) 10. both leave you satisfied but the urge to purge returns very quickly 11. tendency to lock the bathroom door for both, when “composing” 12. filed on your computer as introspection and mindfulness (that cracks me up) 13. gonna stop right here so you take your ADD meds 14. you love them both in no particular order 15. you cannot get coronavirus from either (sincerely hope not!) 16. your denials deserve a retort: so ***** you too!
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Jun 21, 2020
Jun 21, 2020 at 8:38 AM UTC
what’s the difference tween ************ and writing poetry?
decided why waiting, my name, my curse, my retrocognition, last week, was sore-spent, from abusing discontinuation, retribution, lovers who took more, too much, left contentedly, not looking back over their shoulder, at the wasted wake left behind, nothing to them just was their “been here, now, just a hereafter” remainder reminder can’t believe I’m writing, in these blues lyrics electrified, my ribs, plucked like guitar strings for “pic”ing demand wailing, my own hereafter starts now, past days eradicated, freshened up, these aren’t the days of reminiscing, these are the days of  no más! of my hereafter, now I understand, did not know how, clarity arrived but now will love only in equality, no worshiping, no portraits to be admired  hanging on hallway walls, got rollers and pan, repainting walls crazy whites, starting again, coming out today, the hiding separated, put in trash bags on the street, for takeaway in crazy notions, commencing my hereafter, is inviting you, join me, improve my cadence, my rhymes, finish my sentences, with periods of laughter, commas of words of perfect additions, waiting no more, from here after and ever more so, my name hereafter, is now my retrofitted futures, no longer waiting...
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Jun 13, 2020
Jun 13, 2020 at 11:44 AM UTC
my hereafter starts now (my name, my curse!)
uptown train a rare sighting, a shiny dime,, in a city where clothesworn-grime, an unshed waning gray, a skin coloring, stony faces always chewing, enduring in tunnels neath rivers of streets, there is no moon, so little hope, nightly somebody’s thinking, somebody’s baby, I’ll be, tonight, someday, maybe who will see them as they are, willI I, will I, before they’ve gone too far, roadies, touring to nowhere, disciples, nose-led by a vision, daring, but archetypal there are no gardens, but plenty secrets, all planted, that will never planet bloom, seeds raised to die, in watered sorrows drown, embryos stillborn, passed to daughters down the trains go uptown to shiny places, to uptown people, washed, shiny faces, bedecked with futures, hope, their jewel, but not for them, the downtime people five pm, afternoon dying into night bleeding, the subway noises, the perfumed stink, all, goes unnoticed by senses dulled, unfulfilled, day goes down, another, and another, colored pained refrain, why do we bother?
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Jun 9, 2020
Jun 9, 2020 at 5:13 PM UTC
After Tom Waits: uptown train
the day blinks, the sunset stinks, the rhyming is de-fining, is this how low you’ll go? to get their blood hot, earn their likes and hearts, a lot? your personal side slides, means you don’t need to repent, nyet, been sentenced-sent to the zone of indeterminacy *the day blinks, somewhere tween day dying time and maybe nighttime resurrection* *unless you been there, you missed it when, the day blinks, then all them souls, sinners and saints, (oh yeah, the **** poets too!) sneaky snuck out, went forced marching* into the zone of indeterminacy
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Jun 6, 2020
Jun 6, 2020 at 8:23 AM UTC
the day blinks, sliding into the zone of indeterminacy