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Amazing Mike was full of gifts           that he would share all day. But Average Joe would stay at home           wasting himself away. Amazing Mike and Average Joe           were always best of friends. But Joe was always searching for           the means to an end. One day came when Average Joe           sick of life's displeasure Took a razor from his drawer           and slit his wrists with ferver. Joe had asked "What am I?           A break of unseen monster? Or am I some strain of cancer?"           He never got his answer. Joe didn't wait for death of age           counting his days as "few." Average Joe, now sick with sleep           and so he bid "adieu." "Adieu to you Amazing Mike           whose fortune ne'er rots. Enjoy your life, the gifts for granted           for life loved me not."
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 12:49 AM UTC
Suicide Note
Amazing Mike was full of gifts           that he would share all day. But Average Joe would stay at home           wasting himself away. Amazing Mike and Average Joe           were always best of friends. But Joe was always searching for           the means to an end. One day came when Average Joe           sick of life's displeasure Took a razor from his drawer           and slit his wrists with ferver. Joe had asked "What am I?           A break of unseen monster? Or am I some strain of cancer?"           He never got his answer. Joe didn't wait for death of age           counting his days as "few." Average Joe, now sick with sleep           and so he bid "adieu." "Adieu to you Amazing Mike           whose fortune ne'er rots. Enjoy your life, the gifts for granted           for life loved me not."
When reading this poem, attempt to keep in mind the rhythm of a nursery rhyme. I wrote this poem with the light-hearted progression of a nursery rhyme to contrast with the topic of the poem. Enjoy.
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 12:49 AM UTC
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