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duncan-leugs
duncan-leugs
American Hello. My name is Duncan, and I am a Nursing student at Grand Valley State University. As someone heavily involved in science, I never thought of myself as having an artistic side. However, after studying poetry over 3 years ago, I have found writing to be an emotional release that simultaneously challenges my ability to think in a different manner. / / I do my best to challenge myself in my writing by using different types of meter, rhyme, and symbolism that convey a message. In this way, I hope to make my writing enjoyable to read, but also thought provoking. / / If you have any thoughts, please leave a comment. I still have a lot to learn, and I value feedback and criticism. / / I hope you enjoy.
Two birds cry for what once was. The innocent lamb decomposes for she once were Tossing joy with a painted face humming without distress to the two birds who tended her all for naught. The two birds had watched her succession turning away from her inevitable passing Moments wasted now abandoned Replacing blissful memories with a duet of Piano Sonata sung by the two birds as they attempt to mend the lamb with harmony. Now only one bird cries for the other must sing for what once was.
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Jun 1, 2013
Jun 1, 2013 at 12:48 AM UTC
Two Birds
The splendid southern sun lights the land      breeding the greenest grass      exploding the fairest flowers      reflecting the widest seas      feeding the richest soil      and the kindest people The vast open ocean soaks the skin The soft white sand scalds the feet The breezy air is humid      saturated with ecstasy      but damp with opportunity But as I venture north      films of simple nostalgia conceal these memories      escapes to the southern sun now intermittent. Bliss is overcome with solitude. Reality refracts the northern lamps      replacing the herald of each new day with a sobering awakening. Every day passes slowly      as the factory of life once again begins      as the iron cogs of monotony turn      in their recurrent spin. The last bursts of escape are torn      ripped between the brutish artisans of monotony           like scraps thrown to the dogs           a loaf dropped amongst slaves. This is the limit of our blessed lives      Endless toil and fleeting happiness. If not, show me more      a rescue from these binding shackles. But if so, may I dream      of the southern sun?
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Jun 1, 2013
Jun 1, 2013 at 12:15 AM UTC
I Want to Go Home
Roads ahead concealed by night Though the cyclic sun shines bright. I had once thought I was lost As my skin collected frost. Ne'er was warmth to hold my bones Naked, as my body moaned 'Til by chance a glimpse of light fed my hope, my will and sight. A lantern sits upon the ground without a warning nor a sound. I lift it up in disbelief breathing out the warm relief. With this light and on my own I have found a new way home.
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May 31, 2013
May 31, 2013 at 11:56 PM UTC
Lantern
What kind of a man am I That I am a mystery to myself? That I listen to every voice           of what I can           of what I should           but never what I want. What kind of a man am I That I thrive on interlacing kinship           but I myself am a knotted wreck? That I agree the multitudes surrounding,           and lie to the faces I most long to see? What kind of a man am I That I cannot win a simple game of chess           between what my heart feels           and what my mind knows Instead of conquering my board           upon which a winner is never announced           and peace will never be reached. What kind of a man am I That I have not been honest with the person           because I do not know the self. I alone must make the choice What kind of a man am I If I cannot decide?
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May 31, 2013
May 31, 2013 at 11:49 PM UTC
The Wrong Choice
I wish I could show you true beauty to put a frame to what eyes behold. I wish I could trace your outline           touch your details                     brush your shadows Cutting stone to your remarkable mold. I wish I could stop time with a pencil to frame unintentional glory to capture you, modest           tranquil                     serene Making seconds outlast eternity. I wish I could capture these moments these pauses so precious to me Instants of awe and breathless watching painting to memory what I perceive. So brief are these hallowed moments and so erratically intermittent that I find myself hoping           lingering                     longing Forgetting the time in between them. I wish I had the faculty to contain your gilded beauty. Instead, I watch, and cherish these moments, For in them           I love you                     and you only.
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 1:30 AM UTC
If I were an Artist
Dawn breaks, and with it yawns wake the dreary bodies of those who accept the foggy boon of Sunshine. Through dusty windows or glossy eyes Desire envelops reality until Realization drops in the mind as a clear glass of water slowly spills empty. Worry moans as Coherence opens its eyes to scold the brilliant invader. Thought takes hold and dreams are discarded. Who sighs? Lifting his head, asking the light Who am I?
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 1:20 AM UTC
Good Morning
The intricate anatomy of the human body, with its ups and downs its ins and outs its curves. The beautiful curves that draw a certain feeling of longing that none can easily forget Slow, my eyes trace her sentient form down down to her edge.
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 1:16 AM UTC
Form
As I gaze upon the sea I thought of only you and me. The love that could have drowned an anthem a love so deep we could not fathom. I recall these days of old when dreams were bright and waters cold when silent breeze with fingers icy would brush your hair ever so slightly. Ceaseless waves would pound the shore when once we were, but nevermore. At that place where land met sea with water lapping at our feet even now that you're away I pace the shore to waste the day. By the beach we always ran scarring footprints in the sand the memories ingrained in time now washed away amidst the brine. I choke down water with ever breath. Since you have gone, there's nothing left.
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 1:14 AM UTC
Water
Undisturbed these blankets new undisturbed conceal the few. Those who wander worn and weary speak of Spring's antiquity. Winter's callous tears will bring no more odes for choirs to sing. Restless nights breed endless dreams undisturbed to cease the streams. But glory still remains amid wide expanses now deemed placid. I long to feel your touch again but I will wait until you rien. The mornings shine with crystals bright whilst Twilight's solitude holds tight.
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 1:11 AM UTC
Snow
Across dry plains the tumbleweed dances           off the dusty floor As a renounced ballerina reminisces           in her old studio           On the corner of the street                     towards the west                               following the sun                                         where all dreams go And where the wind carries the tumbleweed. The air rustles in the drift           as she sighs Breathing in the dusty smell           of the grass           Of the room                     where she once performed                               for her beloved                                         now carried away                                                   by the same wind                                                   that carries tumbleweeds                                                   and caused dust to dance. A tear soaks the wooden floor           a small relief from the barren span                     for the lonely ballerina                               who is forever carried                               along the scalding land. Lost.           Like words unsaid                     on lips untouched                               cracked by the sun                                         where all dreams go And where the wind carries the tumbleweed.
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 1:06 AM UTC
Tumbleweeds
Across dry plains the tumbleweed dances           off the dusty floor As a renounced ballerina reminisces           in her old studio           On the corner of the street                     towards the west                               following the sun                                         where all dreams go And where the wind carries the tumbleweed. The air rustles in the drift           as she sighs Breathing in the dusty smell           of the grass           Of the room                     where she once performed                               for her beloved                                         now carried away                                                   by the same wind                                                   that carries tumbleweeds                                                   and caused dust to dance. A tear soaks the wooden floor           a small relief from the barren span                     for the lonely ballerina                               who is forever carried                               along the scalding land. Lost.           Like words unsaid                     on lips untouched                               cracked by the sun                                         where all dreams go And where the wind carries the tumbleweed.
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