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Oh, the thrill of the chase as we soar through the air With our home up ahead and the wind in our hair As we draw ever closer, my friend gives a shout but then comes a net and I am knocked out.
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Apr 24, 2020
Apr 24, 2020 at 5:01 PM UTC
The Fall (part2)
Oh, the thrill of the chase as we soar through the air With our home up ahead and the wind in our hair As we draw ever closer, my friend gives a shout but then comes a net and I am knocked out.
this is an Iambic poem I have written as a part 2 of The Fall. After what happened in the fall the remaining child and I are soaring across the ocean to get home. As we get closer to home my friend (the other kid) gives a shout of warning but its too late and a Net flies through the air and hits me, knocking me out.
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Apr 24, 2020
Apr 24, 2020 at 5:01 PM UTC
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