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when I asked how long I would live my father told me about you to comfort to my six year old ears he saw, perchance, I was no longer beguiled by the ignorant innocent myth of immortality, on the same night he spoke of infinite electrons spinning in a car dome light strangely, I knew, even when the car door closed those energized specs would spin forever and dance about on a minute stage when Methuselah was nothing but words on an ancient page still I saw his long white beard counted his earthly years, and asked father if my number would be as great, perhaps colluding to avoid my fate, as the oldest man who ever lived
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May 21, 2013
May 21, 2013 at 10:24 PM UTC
the death of Methuselah
when I asked how long I would live my father told me about you to comfort to my six year old ears he saw, perchance, I was no longer beguiled by the ignorant innocent myth of immortality, on the same night he spoke of infinite electrons spinning in a car dome light strangely, I knew, even when the car door closed those energized specs would spin forever and dance about on a minute stage when Methuselah was nothing but words on an ancient page still I saw his long white beard counted his earthly years, and asked father if my number would be as great, perhaps colluding to avoid my fate, as the oldest man who ever lived
there is, I believe, an Isaac Bashevis Singer short story with this title--it has nothing to do with the poem--this is based on exchanges that occurred between my father and me when I was 6 or 7--he taught me the concepts of infinity, electrons and told me of Methuselah
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May 21, 2013
May 21, 2013 at 10:24 PM UTC
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