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Mother! Mother! You doubt my senses I have barely lived two decades pulling thorns off my heart's delicate petals I am scythed around the stem and smothered deep in the roots Riding these tidal waves of breath for survival. O senses! O senses! Darling! You said my love was irrelevant but to this day I celebrate it, watering dried daffodils on the green outskirts of your shirt to savour your scent of six months ago Each drop of sweat on your face as you dug a tunnel into my very soul and took over this fleshy frame O irrelevance! O irrelevance! I have trudged a dozen miles in the horizon barefoot, bareskin, bare minded Bathed at the gracious hand of sun in the endless sea of love the earth sold at one heartbreak per drop. O earth! O love!
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Feb 26, 2020
Feb 26, 2020 at 11:11 AM UTC
ode to my loved ones
Mother! Mother! You doubt my senses I have barely lived two decades pulling thorns off my heart's delicate petals I am scythed around the stem and smothered deep in the roots Riding these tidal waves of breath for survival. O senses! O senses! Darling! You said my love was irrelevant but to this day I celebrate it, watering dried daffodils on the green outskirts of your shirt to savour your scent of six months ago Each drop of sweat on your face as you dug a tunnel into my very soul and took over this fleshy frame O irrelevance! O irrelevance! I have trudged a dozen miles in the horizon barefoot, bareskin, bare minded Bathed at the gracious hand of sun in the endless sea of love the earth sold at one heartbreak per drop. O earth! O love!
It's the first poem with a better wrapup than others imo. Had difficulty finding a proper name because ughhh too many feelings to fit in one phrase but..here we are.
TinaRSH
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Feb 26, 2020
Feb 26, 2020 at 11:11 AM UTC
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