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My commitment was so  loyal,  that it didn't allow me to break a knot that            you never tied,                                                                                                                                  My thoughts were so loyal that they didn't find anyone or anything more        engaging than you,                                                                                                                                        My heart wasn't believing that the healing it required was because of the damage done by you,                                                                                                 My soul was living in a hope to welcome you again,                                                                                                                                                 Nothing would have changed if loyalty wasn't able                                   To make them believe,                                                                         To make me believe,                                                                                                      that it deserved better!                                                                                                                                                                   -Dhwani pandya
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Nov 19, 2019
Nov 19, 2019 at 8:43 AM UTC
When loyalty didn't choose you...
My commitment was so  loyal,  that it didn't allow me to break a knot that            you never tied,                                                                                                                                  My thoughts were so loyal that they didn't find anyone or anything more        engaging than you,                                                                                                                                        My heart wasn't believing that the healing it required was because of the damage done by you,                                                                                                 My soul was living in a hope to welcome you again,                                                                                                                                                 Nothing would have changed if loyalty wasn't able                                   To make them believe,                                                                         To make me believe,                                                                                                      that it deserved better!                                                                                                                                                                   -Dhwani pandya
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Nov 19, 2019
Nov 19, 2019 at 8:43 AM UTC
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