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Maybe "Singing in the Rain" was really first doing laundry in the rain Easter downpour, as solid as any I remember in Brooklyn, sans lightening Big droplets, teaspoon size, coming down in successive sheets like a hall of mirrors or glistening water, reflected further and further through the misty air, and it's not cold, either, not muggy like Brooklyn the air doesn't stick to your skin, cling to your body and line your nose but the ***** water from the industrial sky still splashes on concrete scattered small boiling mist of filth, oil, the mess of civilization, the foaming "hidden creek" froths out from a concrete pipe behind this place running underneath the parking lot, paved over like the river underneath 125th street in NYC And I haul out my laundry, dragging it first across the ***** carpeting, then down the concrete stairs, past remains of dust and play and gum turned black until I reach the empty laundry room because who in their right mind would do laundry on Easter in the middle of the downpour? And I am dressed for it in a tank top and short skirt and the ***** rain hits my skin, invigorates me, and I rush through it, smiling, listening to the remains of the creek a shower of ***** water from a freshly polluted sky and I know no Broadway dance moves and there are not street lights to cling to, only the inner ecstasy of violating convention, droplets of water all over my chest, legs, being and I wash my hands in icy rainwater flowing over someone's balcony like a refreshing waterfall
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 8:12 PM UTC
Hollywood Rain Behind My Apartment Complex
Maybe "Singing in the Rain" was really first doing laundry in the rain Easter downpour, as solid as any I remember in Brooklyn, sans lightening Big droplets, teaspoon size, coming down in successive sheets like a hall of mirrors or glistening water, reflected further and further through the misty air, and it's not cold, either, not muggy like Brooklyn the air doesn't stick to your skin, cling to your body and line your nose but the ***** water from the industrial sky still splashes on concrete scattered small boiling mist of filth, oil, the mess of civilization, the foaming "hidden creek" froths out from a concrete pipe behind this place running underneath the parking lot, paved over like the river underneath 125th street in NYC And I haul out my laundry, dragging it first across the ***** carpeting, then down the concrete stairs, past remains of dust and play and gum turned black until I reach the empty laundry room because who in their right mind would do laundry on Easter in the middle of the downpour? And I am dressed for it in a tank top and short skirt and the ***** rain hits my skin, invigorates me, and I rush through it, smiling, listening to the remains of the creek a shower of ***** water from a freshly polluted sky and I know no Broadway dance moves and there are not street lights to cling to, only the inner ecstasy of violating convention, droplets of water all over my chest, legs, being and I wash my hands in icy rainwater flowing over someone's balcony like a refreshing waterfall
zulu-samperfas
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 8:12 PM UTC
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