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Its raining heavily, I'm stuck in the mud.Struggling, trying to stay still... I am helpless and can't escape. Before, I wasn't stuck in here, but when I saw her pulling them up; One by one, they all break free. They all rejoice while she still suffers. I couldn't bare it much longer. I took a step and pulls her. Her other half is free at a distance but still miserable behind its own cage. I have decided to take a risk. I'm aware that there's no turning back. I chose to take her place and free her; even if it means I'll be the one to suffer. I wipe her tears with my hand. Wore my smile and tell her it's fine. I promise I will free her from such burden. And see her soothing smile at me again. The more I pull the more I sink, but its fine...so long as she's freed. I will give her my all even I sink deeper. My life is nothing in exchange for her freedom.
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Sep 20, 2019
Sep 20, 2019 at 9:38 AM UTC
Her Freedom
Its raining heavily, I'm stuck in the mud.Struggling, trying to stay still... I am helpless and can't escape. Before, I wasn't stuck in here, but when I saw her pulling them up; One by one, they all break free. They all rejoice while she still suffers. I couldn't bare it much longer. I took a step and pulls her. Her other half is free at a distance but still miserable behind its own cage. I have decided to take a risk. I'm aware that there's no turning back. I chose to take her place and free her; even if it means I'll be the one to suffer. I wipe her tears with my hand. Wore my smile and tell her it's fine. I promise I will free her from such burden. And see her soothing smile at me again. The more I pull the more I sink, but its fine...so long as she's freed. I will give her my all even I sink deeper. My life is nothing in exchange for her freedom.
Her happiness is my happiness even if it means I sacrifice my own life and well being. I am willing to give my all.
Kyohi_Hana
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17/F/Philippines
Sep 20, 2019
Sep 20, 2019 at 9:38 AM UTC
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