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Sally sashayed straight to her man's  source Overhead, their song played on with force Like jockeys in a saddle Two lovers rage a battle That madly left their concourses hoarse Logan Robertson 9/07/2019
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Sep 7, 2019
Sep 7, 2019 at 12:28 PM UTC
Sally's a Rendezvous Limerick
Sally sashayed straight to her man's  source Overhead, their song played on with force Like jockeys in a saddle Two lovers rage a battle That madly left their concourses hoarse Logan Robertson 9/07/2019
9/9/7/7/9 The newfound fire, passion and happiness adds to the drive. Note- I'm not sure if the readers picked up on the double meaning of the word choice of overhead. Noted 9/10. To me, I thought it was witty. And certainly risque.
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Sep 7, 2019
Sep 7, 2019 at 12:28 PM UTC
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