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You remind me of myself. You’re a shooting star Because I don’t care where you came from and I can see where you’re going. But most importantly you’re here with me right now and you’re so beautiful. If I had one wish i’d give it to you. You are a nebula, My cloud 9 And the silver lining. Your eyes are like planets so complex And the closer I observe them the more I feel I understand you. That’s why I stare When they rotate and stop at me I find it miraculous that planets would defy their own laws of nature just to pause time for me. Your hair and skin are like galaxies. This galaxy dripped drops of excellency when you were created… Your beautiful brown skin is hard not to kiss Because the Milky Way’s chocolate is priceless Your mind is like a black hole… So hard to understand and no one will ever know its depths but it continuously takes in without hesitation. It attempts to swallow the knowledge of life and existence. Your heart is the Sun… The reason for life as I know it Vital Yet every time I try to get close you hurt me Why? Why can’t you trust me with your Sun? Why can’t I trust anyone with mine?
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Mar 12, 2013
Mar 12, 2013 at 2:14 PM UTC
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You remind me of myself. You’re a shooting star Because I don’t care where you came from and I can see where you’re going. But most importantly you’re here with me right now and you’re so beautiful. If I had one wish i’d give it to you. You are a nebula, My cloud 9 And the silver lining. Your eyes are like planets so complex And the closer I observe them the more I feel I understand you. That’s why I stare When they rotate and stop at me I find it miraculous that planets would defy their own laws of nature just to pause time for me. Your hair and skin are like galaxies. This galaxy dripped drops of excellency when you were created… Your beautiful brown skin is hard not to kiss Because the Milky Way’s chocolate is priceless Your mind is like a black hole… So hard to understand and no one will ever know its depths but it continuously takes in without hesitation. It attempts to swallow the knowledge of life and existence. Your heart is the Sun… The reason for life as I know it Vital Yet every time I try to get close you hurt me Why? Why can’t you trust me with your Sun? Why can’t I trust anyone with mine?
so this isn't my poem, it's one a very special friend of mine wrote and I'm so in love with it. I really admire his writing and well here's his best, in my opinion.
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Mar 12, 2013
Mar 12, 2013 at 2:14 PM UTC
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