Tip toeing around the sun 
Silence so peaceful 
Graceful sails into summer

Poetically_Elena

Sailor of the Sun

There are elements of nature here and they are used well to develop a good poem, brief in composition but sweet in meaning.
Thanks!

i loved the originality of the title and that you had included a season which is very traditional in haiku. fantastic.

Depth, creativity, originality... all there all great, Elena. Like sailing into a pool of golden light. ")