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She was very kind. She even kindle the light, To my eyes. She brought me to my senses. When I was broken. When I couldn’t stand up, She was there, To help me up. What could I do without her. My depression seemed senseless. My joyful attitude had risen. And her beautiful eyes, Really blossom the night. What could I do, But ask her tonight. As I made my attempt, Her smile was tempting my heart. With the sudden warmth, Of a relationship so appreciated. Since love is so vague, I appreciate her everyday. Seeing her cry hurt more, Than the reasons she did. Watching her struggle, Tighten my chains. Not being able to care, Really hurt my caring feelings. I hold to her, To shine the way for her, Darkest days. Oh how much I cared for her. The way she writes, Doesn’t need to be define. I just need to see her smile, When pen hits the paper. I always wish her a beautiful day, In my mind. For she doesn’t feel pressured, But when she finally answered. It was too late... My hesitation, From my intimidation. Really made me late, To what I really tried, But it’s pleasant. She is still doing fine. All I offered was a presence, For she wouldn’t be alone. At least she isn’t alone, Despite me.....
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May 8, 2019
May 8, 2019 at 12:09 AM UTC
A Truly Blessed Person
She was very kind. She even kindle the light, To my eyes. She brought me to my senses. When I was broken. When I couldn’t stand up, She was there, To help me up. What could I do without her. My depression seemed senseless. My joyful attitude had risen. And her beautiful eyes, Really blossom the night. What could I do, But ask her tonight. As I made my attempt, Her smile was tempting my heart. With the sudden warmth, Of a relationship so appreciated. Since love is so vague, I appreciate her everyday. Seeing her cry hurt more, Than the reasons she did. Watching her struggle, Tighten my chains. Not being able to care, Really hurt my caring feelings. I hold to her, To shine the way for her, Darkest days. Oh how much I cared for her. The way she writes, Doesn’t need to be define. I just need to see her smile, When pen hits the paper. I always wish her a beautiful day, In my mind. For she doesn’t feel pressured, But when she finally answered. It was too late... My hesitation, From my intimidation. Really made me late, To what I really tried, But it’s pleasant. She is still doing fine. All I offered was a presence, For she wouldn’t be alone. At least she isn’t alone, Despite me.....
At least I had guts, I’m back and I hope you guys enjoyed this return poem. I made it long since I had so much time to plan it. I really hope you appreciate this piece. If you’re wondering about the “Obsession with a car” it’s at 1.6k views and Im proud, so proud I submitted it to a contest and made 3rd place. I’m really happy. I hope all the best you all despite your tragedies ❤️
BIGGEO
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19/M/Hialeah
May 8, 2019
May 8, 2019 at 12:09 AM UTC
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