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your greedy metal mouth  (the taste of tin will never leave my tongue) engulfs me (my parenthetical affection can only last so long )
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Feb 18, 2013
Feb 18, 2013 at 12:01 PM UTC
metal mouth
your greedy metal mouth  (the taste of tin will never leave my tongue) engulfs me (my parenthetical affection can only last so long )
This is like the third poem I've written about the taste of different metals
mara-siegel
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Feb 18, 2013
Feb 18, 2013 at 12:01 PM UTC
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