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My life-long journey I made to the furthest edge of experience--in patience and humility-- old age begins to tell but no message of understanding or joy has greeted me in my passage I'm far from being enriched what's before me is dim and desolate-- the field is parched the trees are starved the sea is tideless the sky is charcoal-black birds have taken flight new havens to locate they would never come back there's nothing here for an old man to celebrate but to sigh and regret-- there's not the slightest flicker of light in the stealthy night there's no moon awaiting nor a single star in sight- I feel the utter emptiness my heart begins to cry my feet are frozen in numbness as the bitter winds unabatedly blow by.
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Mar 3, 2019
Mar 3, 2019 at 12:34 AM UTC
THE JOURNEY OF EXPERIENCE
My life-long journey I made to the furthest edge of experience--in patience and humility-- old age begins to tell but no message of understanding or joy has greeted me in my passage I'm far from being enriched what's before me is dim and desolate-- the field is parched the trees are starved the sea is tideless the sky is charcoal-black birds have taken flight new havens to locate they would never come back there's nothing here for an old man to celebrate but to sigh and regret-- there's not the slightest flicker of light in the stealthy night there's no moon awaiting nor a single star in sight- I feel the utter emptiness my heart begins to cry my feet are frozen in numbness as the bitter winds unabatedly blow by.
* after T.S.Eliot
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Mar 3, 2019
Mar 3, 2019 at 12:34 AM UTC
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