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Does it bother you What I'm proposing Feeling numb My thoughts I'm freezing I dont need to leave I just need a break I'll be back by tomorrow And pretend things are great I hide it away Under the ice I'm taking a break Not taking my life I'm just explaining The path I have chosen I think id feel better If my thoughts were frozen It's not forever It's like temporary death I just hit pause and Its so cold I see my breath
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Jan 8, 2019
Jan 8, 2019 at 9:48 PM UTC
Frozen
Does it bother you What I'm proposing Feeling numb My thoughts I'm freezing I dont need to leave I just need a break I'll be back by tomorrow And pretend things are great I hide it away Under the ice I'm taking a break Not taking my life I'm just explaining The path I have chosen I think id feel better If my thoughts were frozen It's not forever It's like temporary death I just hit pause and Its so cold I see my breath
Frozen is about just hitting pause on emotions and taking a mental health break, whether it be a break from a relationship, socializing, etc. I'll eventually put this one as spoken track on YouTube
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Joren
18/M/Trench
Jan 8, 2019
Jan 8, 2019 at 9:48 PM UTC
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