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We're not going to get over this No common sense anywhere in sight Strangers merely passing in the night To what end are we arriving at? Love is breaking and hearts are aching. You ask and take and never give back Know that you are testing my limits The final straw snaps within my fist Rules don't matter to you anymore, And I'm about to blow the whistle So do I keep trying to love you? Do I labor on and work things out? I stand upon undecisive ground. A needle's fall is heard around you Full blown looks of ice upon your face... Commitment's not a part of your world. What is it you really want from me? I'm having a hard time loving you Thinking of the tension on the line Of fear and doubt, whenever it snaps. You don't understand how I see you Wouldn't you be different if you could? Get a clue, you aren't acting yourself. This wonderful heart that I once met From the dove to the hungry raven Any hope I had is almost lost Other times I know we can make it Guy and girl, we can come together I want you to see my heart tearing Just glance inside my eyes and witness Wanna know how my heart still lives? Tell me, would you glance in the mirror? You who became something so obtuse? How can you toss away my feelings? I'm breaking down, do you not see me? Feeling is lost and the mind is numb Gotta show you where we are in time Make you see the darkness between us You are blind, but let me help you see Understand my despairing last cry Never more will you play with my time, Gonna set you straight, put you in line. Give me your true, everloving heart You will really truly be surprised Up above, read the first word on every line.
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Apr 8, 2010
Apr 8, 2010 at 7:24 PM UTC
Giving You Up
We're not going to get over this No common sense anywhere in sight Strangers merely passing in the night To what end are we arriving at? Love is breaking and hearts are aching. You ask and take and never give back Know that you are testing my limits The final straw snaps within my fist Rules don't matter to you anymore, And I'm about to blow the whistle So do I keep trying to love you? Do I labor on and work things out? I stand upon undecisive ground. A needle's fall is heard around you Full blown looks of ice upon your face... Commitment's not a part of your world. What is it you really want from me? I'm having a hard time loving you Thinking of the tension on the line Of fear and doubt, whenever it snaps. You don't understand how I see you Wouldn't you be different if you could? Get a clue, you aren't acting yourself. This wonderful heart that I once met From the dove to the hungry raven Any hope I had is almost lost Other times I know we can make it Guy and girl, we can come together I want you to see my heart tearing Just glance inside my eyes and witness Wanna know how my heart still lives? Tell me, would you glance in the mirror? You who became something so obtuse? How can you toss away my feelings? I'm breaking down, do you not see me? Feeling is lost and the mind is numb Gotta show you where we are in time Make you see the darkness between us You are blind, but let me help you see Understand my despairing last cry Never more will you play with my time, Gonna set you straight, put you in line. Give me your true, everloving heart You will really truly be surprised Up above, read the first word on every line.
Written: April 8, 2010 @ 7:08 PM CDT This poem was written for laughs. Hope you enjoy if you understand why.
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Apr 8, 2010
Apr 8, 2010 at 7:24 PM UTC
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