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She said my eyes were like stars that day We'd been kissed by a flurry of leaves - Autumn in the forest. She said my mouth was so wide I could've caught flies in it. "Isn't the forest beautiful?" She'd asked on gentle breath. "Yeah," I said, "I ******* love trees."
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 7:49 PM UTC
Nice Forest Poem
She said my eyes were like stars that day We'd been kissed by a flurry of leaves - Autumn in the forest. She said my mouth was so wide I could've caught flies in it. "Isn't the forest beautiful?" She'd asked on gentle breath. "Yeah," I said, "I ******* love trees."
I wrote this poem after a few drinks. It’s absolutely awful and far too flowery even by my standards, but my poetry lecturer said it’s a humorously subversive and ironic piece. Maybe I should drink more often.
#funny#humour#comedy#drunk#irony#twee#forest#nature#imagery#creative
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 7:49 PM UTC
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