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Fizzing through the rain and feeling, slosh and wipers ice-skate the glass, while soft hands firm their grip on the wheel. Sputtering love permeates the compact space ...in between droplets, the splintered reflection of: the one both inward and outward - self-excavating & selfless A '100% pure and natural' spring water hurls itself, off the seat and hits the floor, I reach to retrieve and eyes meet. The rearviewmirror, now smeared with dust, Georgia beaming down on Florida - a state-line and a statement Wisps of theme park hair, dance and taunt the air, blow out the gaping window. Two setting sun figures - testing the afternoon, two watched wrists entwine, a case to be made for pit stops.
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 3:28 AM UTC
Overdrive
Fizzing through the rain and feeling, slosh and wipers ice-skate the glass, while soft hands firm their grip on the wheel. Sputtering love permeates the compact space ...in between droplets, the splintered reflection of: the one both inward and outward - self-excavating & selfless A '100% pure and natural' spring water hurls itself, off the seat and hits the floor, I reach to retrieve and eyes meet. The rearviewmirror, now smeared with dust, Georgia beaming down on Florida - a state-line and a statement Wisps of theme park hair, dance and taunt the air, blow out the gaping window. Two setting sun figures - testing the afternoon, two watched wrists entwine, a case to be made for pit stops.
Inspired by my time overseas, and road trips with those I'm fond of. Been tinkering with this one for a while.
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27/M/Sydney
Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 3:28 AM UTC
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