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Sometimes on days like these I watch rain wash my skin like whispers and it reminds me of you. I remember when you taught me that the drops splattering on your windshield like screams (making it impossible to see the impatient bloodlights in front of us) were beautiful. I couldn't hear you at first from the ear-beating whip of your wipers. Then with just one smooth, ink-like movement, you silenced them... and I sat in serenity, amazement, as your eyes lit the falling tears on the slowly diminishing glass-metal frame that swathed us. I forget when it disappeared... but before I had the chance to fashion your visage in my brain, I was sitting naked in the rain, letting you wash my skin while you murmured sunlight in my ear.
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Oct 4, 2018
Oct 4, 2018 at 3:53 PM UTC
Age is Just a Number
Sometimes on days like these I watch rain wash my skin like whispers and it reminds me of you. I remember when you taught me that the drops splattering on your windshield like screams (making it impossible to see the impatient bloodlights in front of us) were beautiful. I couldn't hear you at first from the ear-beating whip of your wipers. Then with just one smooth, ink-like movement, you silenced them... and I sat in serenity, amazement, as your eyes lit the falling tears on the slowly diminishing glass-metal frame that swathed us. I forget when it disappeared... but before I had the chance to fashion your visage in my brain, I was sitting naked in the rain, letting you wash my skin while you murmured sunlight in my ear.
This was written when I was 14 about my first boyfriend (and the man who ***** me), and was the first poem I wrote in free-verse. Despite the pain obviously attached to it, this remains one of my favorite self-written works.
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28/F/Texas, of all places
Oct 4, 2018
Oct 4, 2018 at 3:53 PM UTC
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