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through the thick soup of human plankton a tiny gray particle me in the thick soup of bodies human plankton me looking up the sun clouded by layers of human plankton above me me looking up skies obscured by layers of human plankton above me me pushing my way up through the thick layers of human plankton upwards for just one, just one breath of fresh air
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Dec 5, 2012
Dec 5, 2012 at 6:58 PM UTC
Upwards
through the thick soup of human plankton a tiny gray particle me in the thick soup of bodies human plankton me looking up the sun clouded by layers of human plankton above me me looking up skies obscured by layers of human plankton above me me pushing my way up through the thick layers of human plankton upwards for just one, just one breath of fresh air
Does it look better in this shape?
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Latvian
Dec 5, 2012
Dec 5, 2012 at 6:58 PM UTC
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