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I guess we were bored, Or looking for something new. And there was a party coming up. Someone's hosting debut. So we thought we'd ask around, See what else was to do. And our **** dealer told us He sold other things too. He nicknamed it dizz, And it sounded quite fun. So we talked all about it, Decided to get some. We all pitched in, Asked for five or ten pounds. And went and collected it; Tin foil bound. Accompanying us Was a sober mate. He said it would be fun To watch and spectate. So we unwrapped it, Crushed it, Poured it, And drank it. The taste was disgusting, Of abstract chemicals. But we swallowed it down, A moment; seminal. They said twenty minutes, So we sat and waited. Our hearts were pumping Way before eight. And we went downstairs, Sat on a sofa, Biding our time, Sipping on cola... And there. What was that. A feeling. It entered the chat. Some warmth, No stress. And then a Very deep breath Of fresh air And emotion. Like emerging from the bottom Of a very deep ocean You had been down for years. Reggae was playing At very high volume. And none wanted staying Where we were. So we got up keen, And started dancing. One even went on the wet trampoline And bounced Up, down, Up, down, Could've gone till sundown. And the sky was gorgeous; Metallic, steel blue Mixed with orange and yellow. It was quite the view. But time was Moving on, So we packed up, And were almost gone Before keys jangled, And the door swung open. A parent walked in, And caused a commotion Of boys rushing out, Mumbling words and plans. We left quite abruptly, And sprinted and ran. Once round the corner, We couldn't care less. Nonchalant as usual, We enjoyed the success. And we walked and talked About pure, utter, ***** The iPhone X, some girls, And the absolute banger that would be tonight. So we strolled around, The sun on our faces, Feeling elated. Going some places.
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Aug 21, 2018
Aug 21, 2018 at 7:01 PM UTC
Euphoria Salts
I guess we were bored, Or looking for something new. And there was a party coming up. Someone's hosting debut. So we thought we'd ask around, See what else was to do. And our **** dealer told us He sold other things too. He nicknamed it dizz, And it sounded quite fun. So we talked all about it, Decided to get some. We all pitched in, Asked for five or ten pounds. And went and collected it; Tin foil bound. Accompanying us Was a sober mate. He said it would be fun To watch and spectate. So we unwrapped it, Crushed it, Poured it, And drank it. The taste was disgusting, Of abstract chemicals. But we swallowed it down, A moment; seminal. They said twenty minutes, So we sat and waited. Our hearts were pumping Way before eight. And we went downstairs, Sat on a sofa, Biding our time, Sipping on cola... And there. What was that. A feeling. It entered the chat. Some warmth, No stress. And then a Very deep breath Of fresh air And emotion. Like emerging from the bottom Of a very deep ocean You had been down for years. Reggae was playing At very high volume. And none wanted staying Where we were. So we got up keen, And started dancing. One even went on the wet trampoline And bounced Up, down, Up, down, Could've gone till sundown. And the sky was gorgeous; Metallic, steel blue Mixed with orange and yellow. It was quite the view. But time was Moving on, So we packed up, And were almost gone Before keys jangled, And the door swung open. A parent walked in, And caused a commotion Of boys rushing out, Mumbling words and plans. We left quite abruptly, And sprinted and ran. Once round the corner, We couldn't care less. Nonchalant as usual, We enjoyed the success. And we walked and talked About pure, utter, ***** The iPhone X, some girls, And the absolute banger that would be tonight. So we strolled around, The sun on our faces, Feeling elated. Going some places.
A recounting of a fond memory of mine.
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17/M/Bristol
Aug 21, 2018
Aug 21, 2018 at 7:01 PM UTC
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