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There's one small thing I wish               the infinite horizon that lies there                                                    To see  When you're standing here       there's nothing greater to contemplate                                              With me       To feel that brilliant abyss                       across splendid land and sea                                                      Shining out       As within those eyes I used                nothing more and simply grand                                                         To know Chief grandiose and simplicity                           those eyes I loved so                                                           To know   Beauty aqueous and of earth                are feelings of my heart's abyss                                                   Shining out Thoughts so constant- effortlessly            you stand close inadvertently                                                          With me      Be the infinite horizon I want                    I wish too many small things                                                             To see
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Nov 28, 2012
Nov 28, 2012 at 7:48 PM UTC
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There's one small thing I wish               the infinite horizon that lies there                                                    To see  When you're standing here       there's nothing greater to contemplate                                              With me       To feel that brilliant abyss                       across splendid land and sea                                                      Shining out       As within those eyes I used                nothing more and simply grand                                                         To know Chief grandiose and simplicity                           those eyes I loved so                                                           To know   Beauty aqueous and of earth                are feelings of my heart's abyss                                                   Shining out Thoughts so constant- effortlessly            you stand close inadvertently                                                          With me      Be the infinite horizon I want                    I wish too many small things                                                             To see
Tell me what ya think. I don't usually like to dictate how to read my poetry... but: The middle words are the end of the line in front and the beginning of the second line. The right side is to be read middle+second after reading the first+middle.  If you read carefully... the words of the lines before the first "to see" and after the second are alike, along with before "with me" and after the second and so on.
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Nov 28, 2012
Nov 28, 2012 at 7:48 PM UTC
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