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I could feel it. The pressure rising in the room like I was back in the fire ; heat rising above me as I lay on the ground ******* in all the clean oxygen I could find Like I was back on the fire; crawling across my bedroom floor trying to find a way out amongst the clouds of smoke Like I was back in the fire; feeling my skin boil as I tumble down the stairs looking for the front door Like I was back in the fire The fire All I can feel are the flames dancing on my skin I felt like I’m back in the fire even though I knew we made it out alive but the fire it’s all I can feel now I sat in that room for 3 hours wondering if the doctors could feel the pressure like I do
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Jul 2, 2018
Jul 2, 2018 at 1:50 PM UTC
Did they feel it ?
I could feel it. The pressure rising in the room like I was back in the fire ; heat rising above me as I lay on the ground ******* in all the clean oxygen I could find Like I was back on the fire; crawling across my bedroom floor trying to find a way out amongst the clouds of smoke Like I was back in the fire; feeling my skin boil as I tumble down the stairs looking for the front door Like I was back in the fire The fire All I can feel are the flames dancing on my skin I felt like I’m back in the fire even though I knew we made it out alive but the fire it’s all I can feel now I sat in that room for 3 hours wondering if the doctors could feel the pressure like I do
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Jul 2, 2018
Jul 2, 2018 at 1:50 PM UTC
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