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There is a bright light That which leads to a bike An enchanting, gravitating and inticing light I found myself reaching for it Then there was thunder Which was followed by rain Heavy, threatning rain I retreated I felt defeated The surrender and defeat, however could not withstand My gravitation towards the bike Then, there was raging thunder And heavy, presistent protesting rain As I reached for the bike The rain became more enraged But it could not withstand My desire My strong desire To ride away With the wind blowing in my face I grabbed the bike The rain ceased And I rode and rode away Away from the dark clouds I splashed into the puddles as I peadled I felt the sting of the water on my legs There were many many puddles Im my path there was a hill A very steep hill And I saw a light at the top An enchanting, gravitating and inticing light I peadled, peadled and peadled My feet began to ache My knees began to inflame And sweat found home across my forehead The bike laid almost still on the hill Barely moving an inch Yet my body felt like it had rode across the world The gears were changed Yet the distance was not My control of the bike was lost I rolled away, away and away Backwards I fell at the bottom of the hill with a thud A loud thud of defeat And bruises of failure I blamed the rain There was nothing I could've done The rain stood in my way Eliminated the friction   My ticket to the light I laid there Then I got up Rode the bike up the hill I fell again   And again I got up And again I fell And again I got up And again I fell Until the bright morning sun Transformed into a blazing sunset After many falls After many bruises I was again on the steep hill Peadling, peadling and peadling Until I saw the light
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Jul 11, 2018
Jul 11, 2018 at 9:56 PM UTC
The Light
There is a bright light That which leads to a bike An enchanting, gravitating and inticing light I found myself reaching for it Then there was thunder Which was followed by rain Heavy, threatning rain I retreated I felt defeated The surrender and defeat, however could not withstand My gravitation towards the bike Then, there was raging thunder And heavy, presistent protesting rain As I reached for the bike The rain became more enraged But it could not withstand My desire My strong desire To ride away With the wind blowing in my face I grabbed the bike The rain ceased And I rode and rode away Away from the dark clouds I splashed into the puddles as I peadled I felt the sting of the water on my legs There were many many puddles Im my path there was a hill A very steep hill And I saw a light at the top An enchanting, gravitating and inticing light I peadled, peadled and peadled My feet began to ache My knees began to inflame And sweat found home across my forehead The bike laid almost still on the hill Barely moving an inch Yet my body felt like it had rode across the world The gears were changed Yet the distance was not My control of the bike was lost I rolled away, away and away Backwards I fell at the bottom of the hill with a thud A loud thud of defeat And bruises of failure I blamed the rain There was nothing I could've done The rain stood in my way Eliminated the friction   My ticket to the light I laid there Then I got up Rode the bike up the hill I fell again   And again I got up And again I fell And again I got up And again I fell Until the bright morning sun Transformed into a blazing sunset After many falls After many bruises I was again on the steep hill Peadling, peadling and peadling Until I saw the light
This is my very first poem so if anyone actually sees this some constructive criticism would be very helpful!
#failure#rain#sun#perseverance#disappointment#water#defeat#light#sadness
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1tonya
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Jul 11, 2018
Jul 11, 2018 at 9:56 PM UTC
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