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jack's eyes threw darts at his he couldn't stand his target of life growing smaller by day the eye of the bull sees red when wife left she became a blur the mat at her door denied killed him Logan Robertson 5/30/2018
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May 30, 2018
May 30, 2018 at 3:22 AM UTC
Jack's Undying Love Gored
jack's eyes threw darts at his he couldn't stand his target of life growing smaller by day the eye of the bull sees red when wife left she became a blur the mat at her door denied killed him Logan Robertson 5/30/2018
I just love this poem. However, I'm afraid readers have a hard time understanding the poem judging by the few views (a 100 or so in 9 months). Who is Jack? Jack is the personification of a bull and former husband. He sees red, a blur. His target (life) is getting smaller (because his wife left him). Hence the mat at the door (Matador) denied killing him.
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May 30, 2018
May 30, 2018 at 3:22 AM UTC
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