My head swims for freedom
But its given a swimming pool
Enclosed with drowning thoughts
Limited- replaced with your words.
This was no sea to explore,
No song to stick.
But few lines so horrid, so hurtful
As though horns had struck my mind
Leaving me in vein of those
Who have total control.
Soon i had forgotten all those good times
Soon i had forgotten all the bad as well
But there they were- your chorus
And that filled up all there ever was.
Apr 27, 2018
Apr 27, 2018 at 1:32 PM UTC
My head swims for freedom
But its given a swimming pool
Enclosed with drowning thoughts
Limited- replaced with your words.
This was no sea to explore,
No song to stick.
But few lines so horrid, so hurtful
As though horns had struck my mind
Leaving me in vein of those
Who have total control.
Soon i had forgotten all those good times
Soon i had forgotten all the bad as well
But there they were- your chorus
And that filled up all there ever was.
Some people underestimate the effect of words. Yes, actions are more reliable and definitely effective but words are not meaningless. Personally, what people say about me is the least of my concern because everyone is going to hate. But specific words get to me. This poem is about a someone who was almost my everything and i thought things would only get better. As soon as that someone said so and so, everything changed. This inspired this poem.
