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Breathtakingly stark icy pools in somber eyes distant, secluded
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Apr 7, 2018
Apr 7, 2018 at 6:49 AM UTC
Sombre eyes ~ haiku
Breathtakingly stark icy pools in somber eyes distant, secluded
My first ever haiku. How was it? Any improvements needed?
#sombre
#pond
#sad
#stark
#eyes
#distant
#secluded
#love
#water
#ice
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Saintlybeaut9
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Apr 7, 2018
Apr 7, 2018 at 6:49 AM UTC
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