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When a relationship dies The victim is not always The one left behind Sometimes the better half Innocent and naive Is the one holding the blade After being stabbed Countless times til nearly dead They have the right to live When both brutal options End in blood and homicide Their forced decision is life Only one heart remains alive To bear the shame of pain on the knife It wasnt the good part who deserved to die He was selfish and suffocating She stayed true always stifling Screams that swallowed her soul The inflicter of secret wounds Now has his own cuts to bear Fatal yet deserving Murdered by the angel Too scarred to be recognized By wounds he readily dealt Changed into a phantom, only choice; **** what caused her death inside Her best friend, a beautiful corpse His undead body moves She put out the fire in his eyes Though both ghosts stopped breathing They unwillingly survive
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Apr 2, 2018
Apr 2, 2018 at 11:57 PM UTC
Survive
When a relationship dies The victim is not always The one left behind Sometimes the better half Innocent and naive Is the one holding the blade After being stabbed Countless times til nearly dead They have the right to live When both brutal options End in blood and homicide Their forced decision is life Only one heart remains alive To bear the shame of pain on the knife It wasnt the good part who deserved to die He was selfish and suffocating She stayed true always stifling Screams that swallowed her soul The inflicter of secret wounds Now has his own cuts to bear Fatal yet deserving Murdered by the angel Too scarred to be recognized By wounds he readily dealt Changed into a phantom, only choice; **** what caused her death inside Her best friend, a beautiful corpse His undead body moves She put out the fire in his eyes Though both ghosts stopped breathing They unwillingly survive
This took me forever to write! I am not very good at freeverse if you couldn't tell by the off rhymes i gravitated towards the end. I do like it though.
AmandaKayBurke
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30/F/Alaska
Apr 2, 2018
Apr 2, 2018 at 11:57 PM UTC
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