We see you commander,
Floating away.
Don’t lower your flag,
We need you to stay.
Don’t lift off this Earth.
That won’t do you good.
You’ll only be lonely,
We did what we could.
Will the little men save you?
I think not.
Don’t float away,
Or you will be gone.
Commander, you command this rocket,
Starboard, port, into the abyss.
We serve under you without failure,
But we cannot function like this.
I know you think that no one will care,
But we do, we love you, and life is not fair.
You have a purpose; Commander come back,
Don’t give up on us,
or we will all crack.
Mar 21, 2018
Mar 21, 2018 at 12:45 PM UTC
We see you commander,
Floating away.
Don’t lower your flag,
We need you to stay.
Don’t lift off this Earth.
That won’t do you good.
You’ll only be lonely,
We did what we could.
Will the little men save you?
I think not.
Don’t float away,
Or you will be gone.
Commander, you command this rocket,
Starboard, port, into the abyss.
We serve under you without failure,
But we cannot function like this.
I know you think that no one will care,
But we do, we love you, and life is not fair.
You have a purpose; Commander come back,
Don’t give up on us,
or we will all crack.
Got inspired in the middle of doing chemistry work :/ Bit Bowie inspired.
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