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I love you. You heal me. You are the sun that wakes me, You are the voice that comforts me, You are the best person ever! I hate you. You hurt me. You are the hand that hit me, You are the voice that frightens me, You are the worst person ever! I love you. You are a shoulder to cry on, You are the hug I need, You're okay, I guess... I hate you. You are the reason I cry! You are the one that hurts me, I'm afraid to be around you. I miss you. I miss the person you used to be, before the pain, before the tears, before you hurt me.
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Mar 3, 2018
Mar 3, 2018 at 7:17 PM UTC
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I love you. You heal me. You are the sun that wakes me, You are the voice that comforts me, You are the best person ever! I hate you. You hurt me. You are the hand that hit me, You are the voice that frightens me, You are the worst person ever! I love you. You are a shoulder to cry on, You are the hug I need, You're okay, I guess... I hate you. You are the reason I cry! You are the one that hurts me, I'm afraid to be around you. I miss you. I miss the person you used to be, before the pain, before the tears, before you hurt me.
Okay, so- hurt ("you hurt me") is supposed to be past tense, but heal is supposed to be present tense. I wrote the first stanza from the perspective of my younger self, and then it kind of alternates between younger me and present time me. This was actually the poem I used to get onto this site... I love this poem, it was the second real poem I wrote and it is probably my favourite.
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17/Non-binary/Nowhere good...
Mar 3, 2018
Mar 3, 2018 at 7:17 PM UTC
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