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Five senses attracted people in a lighted room and be one lonely man long I thought which one I should follow Wanting my llife to be worth of more likes I stared at the five senses wondering which one to please They say an eye for an eye, that vision is ideal but to me vision was blind The privilege to hear the lovely melodies of life, but hearing turned me deaf The taste of life, feeling deep the flavor of each experiance but to me life was tasteless It is the touch that affects mankind, a babie's most used sensor but I only touched rasors All the beautiful smells in the world, a fresh flower's beginning but I ony got to smell the dead ones Oh,these senses that people follow vision,hearing,taste,touch and smell are only to fulfill their materialistic nature The sixth sense, the one most misunderstood by mankind this is the one everyone should follow The sixth sense, not instict but a man mind's spirit and persona a world too small for unmaterialistic virtues.
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Feb 24, 2018
Feb 24, 2018 at 10:03 AM UTC
5/6 of a man
Five senses attracted people in a lighted room and be one lonely man long I thought which one I should follow Wanting my llife to be worth of more likes I stared at the five senses wondering which one to please They say an eye for an eye, that vision is ideal but to me vision was blind The privilege to hear the lovely melodies of life, but hearing turned me deaf The taste of life, feeling deep the flavor of each experiance but to me life was tasteless It is the touch that affects mankind, a babie's most used sensor but I only touched rasors All the beautiful smells in the world, a fresh flower's beginning but I ony got to smell the dead ones Oh,these senses that people follow vision,hearing,taste,touch and smell are only to fulfill their materialistic nature The sixth sense, the one most misunderstood by mankind this is the one everyone should follow The sixth sense, not instict but a man mind's spirit and persona a world too small for unmaterialistic virtues.
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Feb 24, 2018
Feb 24, 2018 at 10:03 AM UTC
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