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Ellen101
"In our world it seems to be all a dark and humored game but in reality it is an odd combination of situations and people brought toghether by the might of luck and chance.Life is a surrealistic poem." / -By my- random trying to be poetic- self
Five senses attracted people in a lighted room and be one lonely man long I thought which one I should follow Wanting my llife to be worth of more likes I stared at the five senses wondering which one to please They say an eye for an eye, that vision is ideal but to me vision was blind The privilege to hear the lovely melodies of life, but hearing turned me deaf The taste of life, feeling deep the flavor of each experiance but to me life was tasteless It is the touch that affects mankind, a babie's most used sensor but I only touched rasors All the beautiful smells in the world, a fresh flower's beginning but I ony got to smell the dead ones Oh,these senses that people follow vision,hearing,taste,touch and smell are only to fulfill their materialistic nature The sixth sense, the one most misunderstood by mankind this is the one everyone should follow The sixth sense, not instict but a man mind's spirit and persona a world too small for unmaterialistic virtues.
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Feb 24, 2018
Feb 24, 2018 at 10:03 AM UTC
5/6 of a man
Why do we really live when none of us cherishes and enjoys life everyday? Why are we the chosen ones to be intelligent enough to act like fools?
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Dec 28, 2017
Dec 28, 2017 at 12:20 PM UTC
Life
Once there was a man, he cried while watching the dawn of the day. He would rather stay in the shadow , awaiting for dusk. In the nick of time he worked hard to be backstage he would not let his face shine and he danced with life on his own One bitter tragedy lied this same man in depression. He didn't want to be the stagehand anymore he stood tall and auditioned for the main part. Chances are he wins,but even if he not, he will be priviledged to dwell on the dream: Well,
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Dec 28, 2017
Dec 28, 2017 at 11:57 AM UTC
A perfect tale
Soldiers trying to escape the fire of my passion unequipped,they are all gone. King lost with a face of horror, I have almost retreated. It is foresworn that the enemy will seat on the throne. As he is about to abandon his crown by force, he listens to the sweet melodic sound of might. His soldiers may be walking towards Hades but he decides to stand tall and he starts  a new killing spree. When I think my heart,my castle shall go on my precious beam of hope  falls to the ground. My marvellous king lies still next to my beaten dreams. Oh foolish king, had you allowed me to fight too, a worn out castle would not not be now burning in the hands of your rage.
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Dec 16, 2017
Dec 16, 2017 at 2:30 AM UTC
A worn out castle
My family used to be iconic, a perfect lady as my mother and a hardworking business man as my father our house on the top of the hill was ideal for the thorns that grew inside . I was playing my own part by being a lovely child, trying to hide the scars. But the scars were too painful and blood kept dripping through my costume. though the audience didn't mind me bleeding, the audience didn't mind the thorns, the audience only cared about the show. So here I lay under the hill dreaming about thorns turning to roses.
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Dec 14, 2017
Dec 14, 2017 at 9:18 AM UTC
A lovely thornhill
After all the lights close and the blinds shut, Here he stands wathching everything getting rough For now he sees the sins of the day and life's curse entailes him to act brave This tiny creature ,let him be blessed to dream big. Let him feel the dawn of the day hurt when he hunts his pray, live for only him and weep when his loved ones go to deep sleep Life I am begging you let him compare thee to a dream and be an entitled human in a world of machines
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Dec 10, 2017
Dec 10, 2017 at 3:23 PM UTC
Shall I compare thee to a dream?
Long time ago A single sin rotted her karma She had stolen her sister's most loveable item A long angelic white dress. In the silverness of moonlight One dress would become scarlet red She walked steadily towards her With only anger shining through her michievious eyes Now humming like a scarlet ibis she weaping hapilly walks towards her pray knowing that the dress will always be scarlet
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Dec 10, 2017
Dec 10, 2017 at 2:11 PM UTC
The Scarlet Dress
At the only dead-end hanging on the edge If I pretend to have it all they must ignore my fall. Swinging back and forth in the timeless rockchair I recall the sweet bits of my life trying to ignore the bitterness of their demons Had I risked it all, would the audience still applaud when I fall?
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Dec 10, 2017
Dec 10, 2017 at 1:51 PM UTC
No flaws