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Monday, December 1997 i don't know you you don't know me we never even meet Saturday, Christmas 1999 in the park i was alone you was alone i was busy with my book you was busy with your dog we don't even know, that day: we breathe the same air God knows. Tuesday, September 2001 my aunty Linda was giving birth your mom was sick i have eye contact with a guy in that hospital you have eye contact with a girl in that hospital we don't know we're seeing each other before God knows. Friday, February 2006 heavy rain, i don't care, im sad, broke up with my boyfriend. heavy rain,  you don't care, you'd some work to do i was slowly walking trough the rain, crying you were fastly running trough the rain, i seen you, ran and the world stop, when that bus hit you i came to you, still crying. try to woke you up, doesn't work. Sunday, February 2006 i know your name, Alan you don't know me you open your eyes you said, "what's your name?" im Dee. now you know my name. you said "Thanks to save my life" you smiled. i smiled i thank to God. he was opened his eyes even for 6 hours before his died. at least He know my name. God knows
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Dec 12, 2017
Dec 12, 2017 at 7:22 AM UTC
It's called moment
Monday, December 1997 i don't know you you don't know me we never even meet Saturday, Christmas 1999 in the park i was alone you was alone i was busy with my book you was busy with your dog we don't even know, that day: we breathe the same air God knows. Tuesday, September 2001 my aunty Linda was giving birth your mom was sick i have eye contact with a guy in that hospital you have eye contact with a girl in that hospital we don't know we're seeing each other before God knows. Friday, February 2006 heavy rain, i don't care, im sad, broke up with my boyfriend. heavy rain,  you don't care, you'd some work to do i was slowly walking trough the rain, crying you were fastly running trough the rain, i seen you, ran and the world stop, when that bus hit you i came to you, still crying. try to woke you up, doesn't work. Sunday, February 2006 i know your name, Alan you don't know me you open your eyes you said, "what's your name?" im Dee. now you know my name. you said "Thanks to save my life" you smiled. i smiled i thank to God. he was opened his eyes even for 6 hours before his died. at least He know my name. God knows
First poem, it's bad
Deenore25
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25/F/Jakarta, Indonesia
Dec 12, 2017
Dec 12, 2017 at 7:22 AM UTC
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