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We pour out our hearts in our work We ask for corective critic Not a boastful **** We give so much information about who we are Sometimes the subjects are too sensitive by far The writer may have a hard time being objective yet we want the reader to be subjected Can you see through the poet Eyes the reason for the vivid imagery wise I benefit from knowing your age it assists my thought proces, as a gauge Every ten years a person changes 100% Birth to ten, it is easy to see Ten to twenty, the mindset invincibility I am six years into my fifth life lived, loved, am a mother and wife, happiness, anger, and Strife The more we know about the poet Helps us understands the poem as we know it As we get older we realize how little we know understanding there's so much more room to grow So please fill out your bio age and all the information you want to share so we can review your poem with competent care
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Oct 15, 2017
Oct 15, 2017 at 4:42 AM UTC
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We pour out our hearts in our work We ask for corective critic Not a boastful **** We give so much information about who we are Sometimes the subjects are too sensitive by far The writer may have a hard time being objective yet we want the reader to be subjected Can you see through the poet Eyes the reason for the vivid imagery wise I benefit from knowing your age it assists my thought proces, as a gauge Every ten years a person changes 100% Birth to ten, it is easy to see Ten to twenty, the mindset invincibility I am six years into my fifth life lived, loved, am a mother and wife, happiness, anger, and Strife The more we know about the poet Helps us understands the poem as we know it As we get older we realize how little we know understanding there's so much more room to grow So please fill out your bio age and all the information you want to share so we can review your poem with competent care
I would not give the same at information to 16-year-olds as I would a 30-year-old it does matter as a point of reference where you are in life I'm not trying to be intrusive So if you get out so if you're not comfortable on an exact age perhaps a range say in the 20s , or your teens that still gives a point of reference
cj-sutherland
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Oct 15, 2017
Oct 15, 2017 at 4:42 AM UTC
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