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There are so many potentially great poems, but the problem is they try to formalize their pain, as though a cancer patient upon receiving radiation, or some car crash victim having a hose stuffed up his *** and having his left foot ampuated is going to to be formal. sure there is dignity and composure, but not formality, and certainly not nicety. you're vulnerable, you're hurt- let yourself scream, let yourself out.
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Jun 13, 2017
Jun 13, 2017 at 6:57 PM UTC
let yourself out
There are so many potentially great poems, but the problem is they try to formalize their pain, as though a cancer patient upon receiving radiation, or some car crash victim having a hose stuffed up his *** and having his left foot ampuated is going to to be formal. sure there is dignity and composure, but not formality, and certainly not nicety. you're vulnerable, you're hurt- let yourself scream, let yourself out.
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Jun 13, 2017
Jun 13, 2017 at 6:57 PM UTC
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