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A clothes hanger                    clutches a line                    of paper lanterns                                      lighting my next step                                      on streets my shoes stick to                                                from wheat beer I hear the ‘Pit'                      coursing through cracks                       &                        inebriating aged clay bricks                     ‘Pat”                      of rain on rooftops                                    & falsely take it                                        for Charlie Parker's                                                      'Hot House' but it’s 2am near Tulane   & they’ve graduated to                   tracks from Tremé;                   Brass jazz & barflies;                   Mad Hatters & Mademoiselles                                      dancing barefoot                                      in the French Quarters                                             under red fluorescent lights                                                under cloud-covered stars; She gets them drunk off dance & song; Guaranteed to make locals                       late to last call;                       shows them back-country gems,                         the beautiful ruins known only                                                       by bayou gals                                                             & city folk outside,                                              in search of sirens where the ceiling's missing, dancing 'till their bodies taste like rain They 'crash'                     &                        'splash'                                        .....breaking through worn wooden floors                                                                      & cracks in plaster walls lead by the ‘Pit’                                                     back to the street,                         &                       ‘Pat’                               as other strange drops join the dance,                               descending from skies to rooftops;                                                      Finding lower highs                                                      in search of Bourbon Street                                                                     lost & looking &                                                                 near Tulane at 2am my blue suede shoes are dying of thirst,                                  stuck upon each step;                                           lacking direction &                                         looking for jazz waiting to drown       in the 'Pit'                  & 'Pat'                      & splash                          of this daily rain dance;                          Lose myself in this listening                          as dreamers do                              on the streets near Tulane                              At 2am;
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Apr 26, 2017
Apr 26, 2017 at 9:29 PM UTC
2am near Tulane
A clothes hanger                    clutches a line                    of paper lanterns                                      lighting my next step                                      on streets my shoes stick to                                                from wheat beer I hear the ‘Pit'                      coursing through cracks                       &                        inebriating aged clay bricks                     ‘Pat”                      of rain on rooftops                                    & falsely take it                                        for Charlie Parker's                                                      'Hot House' but it’s 2am near Tulane   & they’ve graduated to                   tracks from Tremé;                   Brass jazz & barflies;                   Mad Hatters & Mademoiselles                                      dancing barefoot                                      in the French Quarters                                             under red fluorescent lights                                                under cloud-covered stars; She gets them drunk off dance & song; Guaranteed to make locals                       late to last call;                       shows them back-country gems,                         the beautiful ruins known only                                                       by bayou gals                                                             & city folk outside,                                              in search of sirens where the ceiling's missing, dancing 'till their bodies taste like rain They 'crash'                     &                        'splash'                                        .....breaking through worn wooden floors                                                                      & cracks in plaster walls lead by the ‘Pit’                                                     back to the street,                         &                       ‘Pat’                               as other strange drops join the dance,                               descending from skies to rooftops;                                                      Finding lower highs                                                      in search of Bourbon Street                                                                     lost & looking &                                                                 near Tulane at 2am my blue suede shoes are dying of thirst,                                  stuck upon each step;                                           lacking direction &                                         looking for jazz waiting to drown       in the 'Pit'                  & 'Pat'                      & splash                          of this daily rain dance;                          Lose myself in this listening                          as dreamers do                              on the streets near Tulane                              At 2am;
Meant to be read like jazz.......preferably, with bourbon
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M/American
Apr 26, 2017
Apr 26, 2017 at 9:29 PM UTC
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