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That week was so hot, every shotgun house gasped, windows flung, screen doors striking wooden frames, the squawk of rusty springs. Touching skin felt like punishment at first, then penance, then prayer. We were thin, androgynous, switching cut-off jeans, sharing tank tops, slick with sweat and shaved ice. Strays ourselves, barefoot thieves, pirates of the quarter. Hibiscus syrup stained our mouths outside the Prytania, where The Abyss flickered and you cried like a boy pretending he didn’t. Inside your walk-up, we dipped into quiet love like bread in stew. The radio’s crackle carried The Ink Spots, which I recognized but couldn’t name. You mouthed every note like a secret you wanted me to guess. Faint smiling lines near your eyes from knowing, like you’d seen me long before we met. Not woman, not man, just two bodies leaning toward the same heat. I wouldn't see your fall or your winter. When the seasons change, I’ll be gone, back home, watching rain from a train window, each drop undoing what we were. That last night, you placed your key by the door. I saw it, watched it glint, and said nothing. The snails were climbing. The air was too sweet. You slept through goodbye. I left the key where it lay.
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Jul 21, 2025
Jul 21, 2025 at 3:16 PM UTC
New Orleans, Late Century
crossing over that fog encased bridge the wind doing ceremonial freedom dances with my hair that first step out of the taxi and onto the vividly colorful rejoicing streets of New Orleans the little drummer boy who played his instrument with such passion my feet couldn’t help but leap along to the rhythm the hippie man on the balcony who shared with me his passionately growing love for his wife... along with his one hitter too and his wife who was never empty handed or lacking energy to dance with any and everybody who danced back the twenty something times my best friend looked at me and told me i was beautiful, each drink he consumed making his voice more desperate and his eyes look deeper within me when the girls below us lifted up their blouses and exposed beautiful ******* of all different shapes, sizes, colors, forms and the flying beads i threw around their necks like champions, followed by my arms extending as i did a jig of excitement the wonderful soul of a girl who bought my drinks and told me to follow my dreams 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.... and a kiss with my best friend who might as well be in love with me a cheers to friendship and freedom to beauty and love to life
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Sep 27, 2019
Sep 27, 2019 at 2:17 PM UTC
moments
This land still sings your silent song I chased it West under suspension bridges In the empty whiskey bottles along Mississippi railroad tracks In the sound of sugar sweet air in blue humid mornings and the cool breath of absinthe sipped by the riverside flanked by banana leaves. Heard it in the breeze of swamp-side Cyprus trees, over swaying docks to rod iron French Quarter balconies, above the Bourbon street children drumming hymns of the Bayou's soul.
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Oct 10, 2017
Oct 10, 2017 at 10:39 PM UTC
America
I thought of you in Paris and remembered you in Zurich I was reminded of you in Moscow and I could not forget you in Cancun My memories were of you when I went back to New Orleans and Tampa Bay I continue thinking of you in Dallas and LA. -R. (16) -LA
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Aug 10, 2017
Aug 10, 2017 at 9:41 PM UTC
-To Those whom it may concern;
A clothes hanger                    clutches a line                    of paper lanterns                                      lighting my next step                                      on streets my shoes stick to                                                from wheat beer I hear the ‘Pit'                      coursing through cracks                       &                        inebriating aged clay bricks                     ‘Pat”                      of rain on rooftops                                    & falsely take it                                        for Charlie Parker's                                                      'Hot House' but it’s 2am near Tulane   & they’ve graduated to                   tracks from Tremé;                   Brass jazz & barflies;                   Mad Hatters & Mademoiselles                                      dancing barefoot                                      in the French Quarters                                             under red fluorescent lights                                                under cloud-covered stars; She gets them drunk off dance & song; Guaranteed to make locals                       late to last call;                       shows them back-country gems,                         the beautiful ruins known only                                                       by bayou gals                                                             & city folk outside,                                              in search of sirens where the ceiling's missing, dancing 'till their bodies taste like rain They 'crash'                     &                        'splash'                                        .....breaking through worn wooden floors                                                                      & cracks in plaster walls lead by the ‘Pit’                                                     back to the street,                         &                       ‘Pat’                               as other strange drops join the dance,                               descending from skies to rooftops;                                                      Finding lower highs                                                      in search of Bourbon Street                                                                     lost & looking &                                                                 near Tulane at 2am my blue suede shoes are dying of thirst,                                  stuck upon each step;                                           lacking direction &                                         looking for jazz waiting to drown       in the 'Pit'                  & 'Pat'                      & splash                          of this daily rain dance;                          Lose myself in this listening                          as dreamers do                              on the streets near Tulane                              At 2am;
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Apr 26, 2017
Apr 26, 2017 at 9:29 PM UTC
2am near Tulane
A clothes hanger                    clutches a line                    of paper lanterns                                      lighting my next step                                      on streets my shoes stick to                                                from wheat beer I hear the ‘Pit'                      coursing through cracks                       &                        inebriating aged clay bricks                     ‘Pat”                      of rain on rooftops                                    & falsely take it                                        for Charlie Parker's                                                      'Hot House' but it’s 2am near Tulane   & they’ve graduated to                   tracks from Tremé;                   Brass jazz & barflies;                   Mad Hatters & Mademoiselles                                      dancing barefoot                                      in the French Quarters                                             under red fluorescent lights                                                under cloud-covered stars; She gets them drunk off dance & song; Guaranteed to make locals                       late to last call;                       shows them back-country gems,                         the beautiful ruins known only                                                       by bayou gals                                                             & city folk outside,                                              in search of sirens where the ceiling's missing, dancing 'till their bodies taste like rain They 'crash'                     &                        'splash'                                        .....breaking through worn wooden floors                                                                      & cracks in plaster walls lead by the ‘Pit’                                                     back to the street,                         &                       ‘Pat’                               as other strange drops join the dance,                               descending from skies to rooftops;                                                      Finding lower highs                                                      in search of Bourbon Street                                                                     lost & looking &                                                                 near Tulane at 2am my blue suede shoes are dying of thirst,                                  stuck upon each step;                                           lacking direction &                                         looking for jazz waiting to drown       in the 'Pit'                  & 'Pat'                      & splash                          of this daily rain dance;                          Lose myself in this listening                          as dreamers do                              on the streets near Tulane                              At 2am;
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It's 10 pm and the heat just hit me The AC is off but I couldn't be more happy Touched my first palm tree and dipped my hand in the toilet Grabbed a cab to the city, on the seat there was a death threat For breakfast we had Bananas foster, po'boys and hash brown When Amanda power walked I had to tell her to slow down By the Mississipi river I drank a peach daquiri The waitress wanted more tips and across the streets she chased me Strippers gave me the finger, ****** begged for ****** We were stuck in traffic cause of the constant flash floods In a Camaro and a Werewolf to creep with vampires and slaves Talking about plantations by the old family graves And you were so beautiful under that big oak tree Even more in the rain outside that locked cemetery On Bourbon street the homeboys were asking for hugs And I gave away all my coins to some thugs We ate jambalaya and fried green tomatoes The ladies were halfnaked but no one called them hoes In a blacksmith shop with no electricity We drank Morgan and got wasted with some other swedes Wherever we went we felt the smell of **** From every balcony people were throwing beads All the ***** sounds were drowned out by the air condition On the floor Hoyt from True Blood was changing positions Then Chris slept like a baby when the cockroach sang him lullabies For some reason it made more sense than "bridge may ice"
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Dec 10, 2016
Dec 10, 2016 at 8:15 AM UTC
New Orleans
Nola I came crawling fingernails scratching at your broken concrete blast-ridden ears numb to Music at your center - Now I lay myself down in your canals Along your muddy parks naked; indiscreet I swirl in trumpet music Eddy down echo streets With funeral processions - celebrations of Lives worth living Again and again. I would fold myself neatly In lines like paper airplanes to cut through your wet air like a deft tongue parting lips gasp and gasp again, I want to deep dive in cerulean.
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Apr 21, 2016
Apr 21, 2016 at 8:35 PM UTC
Deep Dive in Cerulean
It's 10 pm and the heat just hit me The AC is off but I couldn't be more happy Touched my first palm tree and dipped my hand in the toilet Grabbed a cab to the city, on the seat there was a death threat For breakfast we had Bananas foster, po'boys and hash brown When Amanda power walked I had to tell her to slow down By the Mississipi river I drank a peach daquiri The waitress wanted more tips and across the streets she chased me Strippers gave me the finger, ****** begged for ****** We were stuck in traffic cause of the constant flash floods In a Camaro and a Werewolf to creep with vampires and slaves Talking about plantations by the old family graves And you were so beautiful under that big oak tree Even more in the rain outside that locked cemetery On Bourbon street the homeboys were asking for hugs And I gave away all my coins to some thugs We ate jambalaya and fried green tomatoes The ladies were halfnaked but no one called them hoes In a blacksmith shop with no electricity We drank Morgan and got wasted with some other swedes Wherever we went we felt the smell of **** From every balcony people were throwing beads All the ***** sounds were drowned out by the air condition On the floor Hoyt from True Blood was changing positions Then Chris slept like a baby when the cockroach sang him lullabies For some reason it made more sense than "bridge may ice"
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Apr 6, 2016
Apr 6, 2016 at 1:27 AM UTC
New Orleans
In old New Orleans Musical lumberjacks Legitimizing their axes; Just piano, clarinet, Bass and the drums. Bringing jazz back And then some. The cat could play That skinny long black horn, Hotter clarinet than Anybody ever born, He kept hitting notes So pure and high We felt each note In our eyes! And, if you chance by Remember this, They don’t allow dancing. But when the drummer Makes works those skins And makes them talk out There is plenty of toe-tapping And nobody ever walks out. Then, when the guy Plays that bass fiddle He adds an underscore To top bottom and middle. It’s an underbeat of grace That will fill the rest space And the hearts of all In this overcrowded place. Vintage jazz roars out Of an old, old piano Played by a happy madman With fingers afire, he knows He’s got them hooked; He’s making them wild As he wails on those keys He looks out and smiles And he puts the Satchmo touch On those old-timey songs And once in a while They ask us to sing along. For the past forty-six years Those ugly plastered walls Have never hear so many Gratefully rendered curtain calls From an audience of clerks and swells. On Bourbon Street’s Fritzel’s. Through hurricanes and beers Like stepping back a hundred years. Fats is still playing, Bessie singing Original jazz music is still swinging.
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Feb 25, 2016
Feb 25, 2016 at 6:50 PM UTC
FRITZEL'S NOLA
It felt as though the humidity itself carried a hint of liquor as we walked out into the night, wanting only to escape our lives for a little. Deep down in Vieux Carre twisted brass clashed with a piano running half step from the crowded clubs on Frenchman Street. We filled our lungs with the city and found her to be like certain kinds of dangerous doses-- intoxicating. It was our second night and the more we drank the more I began to see glimpses of the specters spoken of by locals. They linger in my peripheral, watching me with their sunken eyes. You could faintly hear them moan, only in defeated tones and their collective scowl danced in the heavy air of summer as though it were a part from all that jazz. In the stranger hours of morn I was approached by a ghost a few blocks off Bourbon. He offered up nothing but his ***** palms in hopes of some false salvation. I wrestled a dollar from my pocket and passed it on to him, only to watch him fruitlessly grasp at it before it slide through his ghostly hands to the floor below. He looked down at the dollar all helpless-like and he said "It’s been slipping through my fingers like dat for years now and ain't nobody help’n me." I walked from him, realizing then why I had needed this trip, I needed to remember all the love in my life because the only difference between me and the ghosts of N'awlins was someone cared about me, and I cared enough about them not to destroy myself.
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Sep 1, 2015
Sep 1, 2015 at 2:06 PM UTC
The Ghosts of N'awlins