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youre a city girl raised on 
fantasy-realities of ivy leagues and
 imminent success your 
only scars are pimple scars
 remainders of a childhood of 
vaguesuccesses. exceptional, they call you, who were 
bred and groomed for this title 
talent is a spectre that haunts 
you and your sibling and every 
otherchild 
born into that grey area between
 happy and sad. you have the world beneath your 
dainty soft feet but its never
 enough to bring you to the summit of 
the desires (expectations) that
push down on you like
 a suffocating cloud that waters your eyes    and 
chokes your lungs. youre afraid to leap 
up (out of sight out of mind out of the safe cradle
of a mothers wisdom and a fathers love and
 the familiarity of being a tightly coiled rope ready to snap)
 and into a sky where suddenly that weight is
 lifted and you feel light 
       (the weight is comfortable, it keeps you grounded)
                                     and perhaps that you were moulded with
 this constant belief that you [are/must be] the best is 
the ________ (only/best) reason to stop yourself. when others have problems that seem so
 much grander and you in your protective bubble 
that even a city cannot permeate (you ignore the sight of beggars 
or thieves or poverty and avert your eyes
 from anything that contradicts
 the perceptions that you have, it doesnt
matter if youre in a city
 plagued by pain and exploitation 
as long as you can live in your (steel tinted) dreams) 
you wish that you had that claim to fame (isnt it sad that
 were so desperate for relevance we
selfishly wish for suffering, trading your own
 trivial vices). but you [dont understand/cant understand/will never understand] 
no matter how many times you
sympathise and complain and romanticise.
 youre just a pimple-scarred city girl carrying
 a world of ideals and expectations on
                    your shoulders.
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Apr 13, 2017
Apr 13, 2017 at 7:59 AM UTC
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youre a city girl raised on 
fantasy-realities of ivy leagues and
 imminent success your 
only scars are pimple scars
 remainders of a childhood of 
vaguesuccesses. exceptional, they call you, who were 
bred and groomed for this title 
talent is a spectre that haunts 
you and your sibling and every 
otherchild 
born into that grey area between
 happy and sad. you have the world beneath your 
dainty soft feet but its never
 enough to bring you to the summit of 
the desires (expectations) that
push down on you like
 a suffocating cloud that waters your eyes    and 
chokes your lungs. youre afraid to leap 
up (out of sight out of mind out of the safe cradle
of a mothers wisdom and a fathers love and
 the familiarity of being a tightly coiled rope ready to snap)
 and into a sky where suddenly that weight is
 lifted and you feel light 
       (the weight is comfortable, it keeps you grounded)
                                     and perhaps that you were moulded with
 this constant belief that you [are/must be] the best is 
the ________ (only/best) reason to stop yourself. when others have problems that seem so
 much grander and you in your protective bubble 
that even a city cannot permeate (you ignore the sight of beggars 
or thieves or poverty and avert your eyes
 from anything that contradicts
 the perceptions that you have, it doesnt
matter if youre in a city
 plagued by pain and exploitation 
as long as you can live in your (steel tinted) dreams) 
you wish that you had that claim to fame (isnt it sad that
 were so desperate for relevance we
selfishly wish for suffering, trading your own
 trivial vices). but you [dont understand/cant understand/will never understand] 
no matter how many times you
sympathise and complain and romanticise.
 youre just a pimple-scarred city girl carrying
 a world of ideals and expectations on
                    your shoulders.
a reflection on privilege.
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Apr 13, 2017
Apr 13, 2017 at 7:59 AM UTC
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