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Bloodied knuckles don't mean much Not that much tonight I'll scream and scream and scream again cause hell, it's worth the fight I'm tired of waiting Of hoping, of wishing Craving you and only you I've run and climbed over everything and God, I hate the view You can't do this Won't hurt me again Do you feel my pain? All you want is what you want and oh, you are so vain
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Apr 10, 2017
Apr 10, 2017 at 8:15 PM UTC
Bloodied Knuckles
Bloodied knuckles don't mean much Not that much tonight I'll scream and scream and scream again cause hell, it's worth the fight I'm tired of waiting Of hoping, of wishing Craving you and only you I've run and climbed over everything and God, I hate the view You can't do this Won't hurt me again Do you feel my pain? All you want is what you want and oh, you are so vain
I'm not sure if this sounds better with or without the last two stanzas. Let me know what you think!
#depression#anxiety#anger#love#lust#pain#dark#sad
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elise-jaco
Apr 10, 2017
Apr 10, 2017 at 8:15 PM UTC
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