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It was an atmosphere It was an oxygen mixed with southern fog Southpaw gloves tied in sailor knots Waves of golden grains in ocean wind The rolling hills behind property lines It was the question you asked not with words but in the way you breathed against the window glass as I leaned against your Corolla And we sang under the overpass It was graffiti It was graffiti It was the cavernous concrete cats with purple hair and acid wash jean jackets melting the light of their city's street lamps into the obsidian void of moistened pavement It was the way the reverb spread the major seventh across the sky with burnt orange cascading into the violet of the minor ninth which reminds me of crickets and summer nights (and violins and cellos and midwestern jazz bars) and how bar chords are a guitarists way of flipping off a crowd- surfing the web for an answer to why I'm still single- handedly the handsomest man in my car currently. It's the cloth in my empty passenger seat soaking up the air of my A/C heat and the scent of the soil spilt from the succulent I was given at a wedding last fall and now I don't know if my trunk will ever smell clean at all But I'll let this night be interstellar I'll take a bath in the Big Dipper and write you a letter about Orion's Belt or how I miss the stars sparkling in your eyes making contact with the E.T. in me. Phone me home, darling. I'm lost at sea. -W.J. Thompson
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Mar 30, 2017
Mar 30, 2017 at 1:13 AM UTC
Taking a Bath in the Big Dipper
It was an atmosphere It was an oxygen mixed with southern fog Southpaw gloves tied in sailor knots Waves of golden grains in ocean wind The rolling hills behind property lines It was the question you asked not with words but in the way you breathed against the window glass as I leaned against your Corolla And we sang under the overpass It was graffiti It was graffiti It was the cavernous concrete cats with purple hair and acid wash jean jackets melting the light of their city's street lamps into the obsidian void of moistened pavement It was the way the reverb spread the major seventh across the sky with burnt orange cascading into the violet of the minor ninth which reminds me of crickets and summer nights (and violins and cellos and midwestern jazz bars) and how bar chords are a guitarists way of flipping off a crowd- surfing the web for an answer to why I'm still single- handedly the handsomest man in my car currently. It's the cloth in my empty passenger seat soaking up the air of my A/C heat and the scent of the soil spilt from the succulent I was given at a wedding last fall and now I don't know if my trunk will ever smell clean at all But I'll let this night be interstellar I'll take a bath in the Big Dipper and write you a letter about Orion's Belt or how I miss the stars sparkling in your eyes making contact with the E.T. in me. Phone me home, darling. I'm lost at sea. -W.J. Thompson
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Mar 30, 2017
Mar 30, 2017 at 1:13 AM UTC
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