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Dear Julie, **** you right back or should I say jules **** you jules with your stupid dumb name your no jewel your smile may sparkle but your heart is made of coal you try to hate me with your letters and words you may even think you do but you love me I've got that bad boy edge and all you've got is that vape your goofy laugh bursts without warning i may go deaf if it happens again dear god please let me go deaf i wouldn't have to hear your slanted remarks always trying to cut deep with old memories but you are the one thats still bleeding you don't even have a shower to wash it away i still have you around my finger writing poems in exchange of a fake reason to come hang out don't even try to deny it cuz I'm the **** and you just stink
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Mar 24, 2017
Mar 24, 2017 at 6:05 AM UTC
Rebuttal to "Simple Things" (not written by me) (PS. read that one first)
Dear Julie, **** you right back or should I say jules **** you jules with your stupid dumb name your no jewel your smile may sparkle but your heart is made of coal you try to hate me with your letters and words you may even think you do but you love me I've got that bad boy edge and all you've got is that vape your goofy laugh bursts without warning i may go deaf if it happens again dear god please let me go deaf i wouldn't have to hear your slanted remarks always trying to cut deep with old memories but you are the one thats still bleeding you don't even have a shower to wash it away i still have you around my finger writing poems in exchange of a fake reason to come hang out don't even try to deny it cuz I'm the **** and you just stink
ThoughtsofaYoungAdult
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Mar 24, 2017
Mar 24, 2017 at 6:05 AM UTC
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