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venus has an off week (and everything goes to **** and you ruin the (white) dress lay in the shadow of what it was grow uglier, weaker without it stop bathing, eating, sleeping, ((don't leave home for a week (for days))) ---- venus stops moving forward (gets cold feet) and you ruin the white dress lay in the shadow of what it was grow uglier, weaker without it stop bathing, (don’t bathe) eating, (eat) sleeping (sleep) don't leave home (for a week) (or leave home for a week) ------------- venus gets cold feet and you ruin the dress lay in the shadow of what it was grow uglier, weaker without it don’t bathe eat sleep leave home for a week
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Mar 24, 2017
Mar 24, 2017 at 4:02 AM UTC
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venus has an off week (and everything goes to **** and you ruin the (white) dress lay in the shadow of what it was grow uglier, weaker without it stop bathing, eating, sleeping, ((don't leave home for a week (for days))) ---- venus stops moving forward (gets cold feet) and you ruin the white dress lay in the shadow of what it was grow uglier, weaker without it stop bathing, (don’t bathe) eating, (eat) sleeping (sleep) don't leave home (for a week) (or leave home for a week) ------------- venus gets cold feet and you ruin the dress lay in the shadow of what it was grow uglier, weaker without it don’t bathe eat sleep leave home for a week
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Baltimore
Mar 24, 2017
Mar 24, 2017 at 4:02 AM UTC
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