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he sat bedside with his great grandmother stroking a hand laced with what he saw as tiny blue rivers, flowing from a thin wrist dammed by ancient knuckles boulders chiseled by eighty-four years he read from his book while Mommy dozed in the chair, and nurses squeaked in and out, all with half smiles he could not decipher, for Grammy was sick and when his mother was awake, she cried he hadn't seen her tears before; he tried not to look, preferring his book with its pictures of the sun, orbiting planets and mazy moons and spaces in between where heaven might hide he understood most of its words, and none were of heavens--unless noxious gasses and swirling clouds of dust were the winds which whipped through the pearly gates but his seven wise years knew that was not so when he turned to the page of the penultimate planet from the sun,YOU-ruh-nuss he discovered it took four score and four years to orbit our star once math's mystery may have eluded him though coincidence was not yet in his lexicon, and now he knew Grammy had her times around the sun, her eighty four equaling one for the great tilting Uranus
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Feb 14, 2017
Feb 14, 2017 at 11:54 PM UTC
a revolution of Uranus
he sat bedside with his great grandmother stroking a hand laced with what he saw as tiny blue rivers, flowing from a thin wrist dammed by ancient knuckles boulders chiseled by eighty-four years he read from his book while Mommy dozed in the chair, and nurses squeaked in and out, all with half smiles he could not decipher, for Grammy was sick and when his mother was awake, she cried he hadn't seen her tears before; he tried not to look, preferring his book with its pictures of the sun, orbiting planets and mazy moons and spaces in between where heaven might hide he understood most of its words, and none were of heavens--unless noxious gasses and swirling clouds of dust were the winds which whipped through the pearly gates but his seven wise years knew that was not so when he turned to the page of the penultimate planet from the sun,YOU-ruh-nuss he discovered it took four score and four years to orbit our star once math's mystery may have eluded him though coincidence was not yet in his lexicon, and now he knew Grammy had her times around the sun, her eighty four equaling one for the great tilting Uranus
Uranus, the next to the last planet from our sun, takes 84 years to make its orbit
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Feb 14, 2017
Feb 14, 2017 at 11:54 PM UTC
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