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I remember the time I really looked into your eyes; I mean I had always thought they were brown, but when I looked, and I mean really looked, I was mistaken. The fourth of July actually was a time for color and celebration, and as I sat beside you and watched the glowing works explode the sky's veil, I knew I didn't want the flames to stop falling through the haziness of your eyes. Speckled green. The perfect color, just in between all the rest, absorbing life itself. Each laugh erupted louder than the booms in the sky, and every smile was something like the Cheshire Cat, gleaming in the darkness. And once the golden whirlwind had ended, once we walked apart, I stayed humming the tune of your voice as it replayed over and over in my mind. -Julia Aubrey Rhodes-
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Feb 3, 2017
Feb 3, 2017 at 5:30 PM UTC
Golden Whirlwind
I remember the time I really looked into your eyes; I mean I had always thought they were brown, but when I looked, and I mean really looked, I was mistaken. The fourth of July actually was a time for color and celebration, and as I sat beside you and watched the glowing works explode the sky's veil, I knew I didn't want the flames to stop falling through the haziness of your eyes. Speckled green. The perfect color, just in between all the rest, absorbing life itself. Each laugh erupted louder than the booms in the sky, and every smile was something like the Cheshire Cat, gleaming in the darkness. And once the golden whirlwind had ended, once we walked apart, I stayed humming the tune of your voice as it replayed over and over in my mind. -Julia Aubrey Rhodes-
this one is for you, for I suppose the keeper of you heart is quite lucky to look into your eyes every day...heaven knows I would be.
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Feb 3, 2017
Feb 3, 2017 at 5:30 PM UTC
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