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I hear the words leave the mouth I thought I knew so well The confession you place on me has an instant effect My vision starts to close in around the sides to a pin point size view it makes everything around us look like blurs of light Your voice begins to sound almost miles away, and I could care less to hear the rest It Feels as if my rib cage just cracked into two perfect almost identical pieces My lungs lose the room they use to have and leave me only shallow breathes to take Shock and Pain come that I hope is powerful enough to teach me a lesson I shift my eyes down to see the damage To my surprise my chest looks to be in one piece, my hand raises slowly to touch where the split should be It shakes all the way to where my heart use to beat on the left side below my collar bone I can’t feel any movement and for a moment I feel relief to the thought of being alive with out a heart nothing to get in the way any more Your timing seemed so perfect the devil must’ve nudged you when to divulge this secret It seems it didn’t hurt you to carry it It won’t do me the same kindness
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Mar 23, 2012
Mar 23, 2012 at 4:12 PM UTC
Fractured
I hear the words leave the mouth I thought I knew so well The confession you place on me has an instant effect My vision starts to close in around the sides to a pin point size view it makes everything around us look like blurs of light Your voice begins to sound almost miles away, and I could care less to hear the rest It Feels as if my rib cage just cracked into two perfect almost identical pieces My lungs lose the room they use to have and leave me only shallow breathes to take Shock and Pain come that I hope is powerful enough to teach me a lesson I shift my eyes down to see the damage To my surprise my chest looks to be in one piece, my hand raises slowly to touch where the split should be It shakes all the way to where my heart use to beat on the left side below my collar bone I can’t feel any movement and for a moment I feel relief to the thought of being alive with out a heart nothing to get in the way any more Your timing seemed so perfect the devil must’ve nudged you when to divulge this secret It seems it didn’t hurt you to carry it It won’t do me the same kindness
Thank you to my guest star muse
karina-rosario
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Mar 23, 2012
Mar 23, 2012 at 4:12 PM UTC
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