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a refugee from Yale, and the stale stench of old money, he took a job with the park service where he maintained outhouses, and got high in the cover of cottonwoods this crap crew job gave him no deferment from the draft, so he landed in Can Tho he didn't clean outhouses there--little people did, stirring his dreck in burning diesel for 75 cents a day when his Huey was shot down in the Mekong, only he and his door gunner survived they hid, submerged in paddies until dark hearing faint but ferocious voices of the VC who never found them--and they made the miracle mile back to base camp, covered in muck that smelled like dung; a scent that stuck with him in dreams, no matter how much he bathed when he came home, he again labored for the forest service, and asked for ********* duty fearing if he lost the smell, he would lose himself as well .
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Jan 25, 2017
Jan 25, 2017 at 11:06 PM UTC
toilets in the cottonwoods
a refugee from Yale, and the stale stench of old money, he took a job with the park service where he maintained outhouses, and got high in the cover of cottonwoods this crap crew job gave him no deferment from the draft, so he landed in Can Tho he didn't clean outhouses there--little people did, stirring his dreck in burning diesel for 75 cents a day when his Huey was shot down in the Mekong, only he and his door gunner survived they hid, submerged in paddies until dark hearing faint but ferocious voices of the VC who never found them--and they made the miracle mile back to base camp, covered in muck that smelled like dung; a scent that stuck with him in dreams, no matter how much he bathed when he came home, he again labored for the forest service, and asked for ********* duty fearing if he lost the smell, he would lose himself as well .
an amalgamation of two stories I heard, one immediately before going to Vietnam, and another four years after returning--odors stick with you
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Jan 25, 2017
Jan 25, 2017 at 11:06 PM UTC
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